Have you ever swim before, if you can't like me, then you understand once reading this book. I know, readers are quick to judge, but once you read this master piece you will sink in too deep.
happy new year please my gift should be released more updates today
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year in advance dear readers. ??We're finally at a hundred chapters and I know some readers have questions to ask concerning the novel. please leave your questions under this review and I'll do my best to answer them all. Thanks. Do have a wonderful Christmas ?❤️u200d?
It is seriously quite intriguing although it feels like running sometimes but too good a read that the pacing is okay with me
First let me start of by saying the reasons I like this novel.The main selling point is the unusual ability of MC to control insects and his merciles persona. Besides that, I personally think the interaction with the spider girl, Victoria is very cute.I always appreciate a good romance inside a novel—not too dramatic, nor too light—along with strong action sequences. If these two factors remain consistent throughout the novel, I might give it a full read until it's finished.I don't think a brilliant writing quality is necessary to attract someone like me, as long as it's not unbearable grammer or too AI generated, its fine.I don't know in which direction the story is shaping—this early in the novel, so I can't really comment about that. Though, I can feel you are trying to build something solid with the flow it's going.Honestly, and I mean I'll be very frank; I'm in it for the spider girl and well made characters, each having a distinct personality. As for the aspects you can improve on:when shifting from a emotion invoking scene to a different one—completely unrelated to it, try not to include too much details or added information in the following scene. I'm saying this because people, when already stirred with emotions beforehand, tend to skim past the long paragraphs filled with information, because they are forced to surrender the emotional content they felt earlier.Now onto the world building. I feel like you can improve on it; you know... adding a bit more depth and information about the world, or perhaps highlighting the surrounding atmosphere and vibes.Consistent upload schedule is always a given. There is no compromise in this, if you want to have a successful novel in this app, especially at the start.And yea, that's about it.. nothing more I can critique on. Keep up the good workP.S: all of these are simply my personal opinions, and I never claim to be an expert.also P.S: I'm a HUGE sucker for good fluffy romance, and action scene.
nice story work and script for the book when I read
This book draws you in. I like it!! Must read more
Muito envolvente, e fica cada vez melhor. Realmente uma novel que te faz querer ler mais e mais. Ainda sim ficou melhor de pois do segundo arco
I really love how different this concept seemed to me. From the beginning u can tell dt drama is truly about to unfold. Looking forward to seeing mysteries getting unveiled and how Zara will get out of all this. Really hoping to see her live no matter what☺️☺️☺️???
Honestly I couldn't relate to a character more she's funny as f and she's got magic how could you not love her and her charm is her laziness
Living life when your doomsday is known is pathetic Wish to see the novel to unfold.
Hopefully the new chapter explain the magic attributes because for now they kinda cofuse me, but is yacha and ursang and mastrata going to be punished for the fights while not focusing on the exam?