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I saw that one of the tags is Villain? Hopefully, he is a villain protagonist! Something about being a baddie is tickling my fancy XD I am quite looking forward to this! I hope he makes terrible choices~
So far its amaizing. Just read 11 chapters and got me hooked up already. In the beginning Im confused about the countries whose enemy whose, maybe you can make a glosary or something. Im also curious how can a metalurgist good at medic and war strategic. Anyway just keep the momentun author, its promising already.
Come on author, take some bleach to whitening your feathers and continue your novel (return from the magic world),don't be shy, this novel is good so far but there are too few chapters, don't be greedy to try writing too many other novels, remember that who is running after many rabbits don't catch no one.
awesome book .I hope author won't leave it mid way and finish the book because it is always painful to see a good story not reaching an end. thank you
I love his personality how it talk about world ams backgrounds
weird but interesting I want more please
Just a review in respect towards your dedication for this series! Good luck bro, hopefully this will blow up like the previous two :D :D :D :D
Honestly, any story with a dragon can't be bad. Dragons are just that cool and make anything better. So read this or you know, don't. I'm just writing some text here, can't really make you do anything other than read this text MUAHAHAHAHAHA
Good concept, but too many useless details added along with pointless info dumps. The story doesnt flow smoothly and a lot of dialouges are annoyinf or forced. Too much focus on small irrelavant details.
I have gotten to about ch 195 on outside sites. This book is decent in both background and writing. However the character is just out of whack. He is straight but seems gay for the whole first 100 chapters. He is supposed to be super smart but never shows it. The skills he receives are broken for the first and doesn’t make sense. If I remember right the icy shot skill has a percent chance of working works every time when the mc wants it to happen!!! What is the point of the others then!!! Its just constantly annoying to hear the author say he is a genius when the mc shows zero signs of those traits. He even seems to be dense and slow with some of his reactions. Archers were able to jump along branches within the beginning days and the mc is a genius just from doing the same thing??!?!!! That’s not genius if many others are able to do the same!!! Don’t tell us he is a genius, show us!!!! He just seems like a regular protected child that doesn’t know the world well. Otherwise, love the story and the world building. Just take away the genius point and you will have a good story on your hands author.
During the first 40 chapters I was very frustrated reading this novel because it was almost the exact carbon copy of Desolate era. I like desolate era but I did not want to read something exact similar to it. But I managed to endure and believe me I was glad that I did not drop this novel because it was fricking great. I all recommend all of you to stick to it until the end.Dear author you did a great job there but I think you should change your writing style a bit since you write a lot of chapters about some things which were not necessary like you spend 5 chapter just explaining the abilities of eye of myriad dao which could have been done in just about 2.5 chapters. So what I want to say is that you focus a lot on unnessary chapters. Anyway keep up the good work.