lordaurelian
This is actually good and not like the forced ones
I love this story so much!! I love how the characters are written and their development. I wish you had more chapters available, I already purchased all premium chapters ?. To be honest, I wish there was a raw version of this story but this seems to be an original work by the author. Such a great find.
I am loving the story so far. But i will be disappointed if he will have a relationship with the daughters of his former party. Because mc is becoming a cupcake man tbh or relationship with his former party or humans they will just die of old age fast, he should go to the secure one like the demon king. And also update daily if possible.
idk. It is so fun and enjoyable to read.
Awesome work here. Can see the versatility of author in writing. I just hope author don't stop this series. I know it is hard to stay motivated if it is not doing well. But please know that I will support as much as I could.
good novel.................................
I would like to say right off the bat this is a well written story despite only having four chapters. They know what they want this story to be and the characters feel real enough to have emotions for their plight. It has an old fashion Japanese setting. I can tell by their writing style this isn't their first rodeo and I am impressed with how vivid the descriptions are. I want to wish the author goodluck as they keep approaching this series. Respectfully Mirai asked me to move this comment over so I am doing so ^^
I'll be very honest here. The concept in itself is good. The world building is good. The novel needs more updates and the rest will gradually become better.
great story I just wish I knew if it is harem. he has met and interacted with a total of maybe 3 guys. I don't particularly care either way but it is odd because with this focus it almost seems really weird when you have 9 different girls all around with some having flirty and cheap characteristics. then all of a sudden he is drawn to one and just flat out mentions the others aren't important to him, which is fine but then why make them all the same temperament and introduce them the exact same way. I am terrible at names anyway so I can't remember what one she was much less what she's done and can do. I guess the biggest flaw i have found is that the characters grow but they all grow the same . I can hardly tell the difference from each character which either stems from inexperience from either me or the author or is used to establish a harem. honestly one of the few where I would specifically recommend harem due to the corner that you have written yourself into with the at least 5 separate women that are all stingy and half are flirty and the rest are just blunt. regardless keep up the good work hope you can find a good ground and escape the corner.
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