This is not my cup of tea. After reading the first 20 chapters I stopped. Especially from the readers' prospect of view, I don't like the decision Mc made, such as Mc's Lapdog and the thought process along with it.
Not an exceptional story, just average. Do give a try and see if it’s upto your taste.
Another author that ping up good revs for hide the bad and delete bad revs ah? Is like whatever novel WN recommend is just more bs and trash nowadays.
A very good read. There are 32 chapters at the moment and I binged them all. The sibling relationship is good, the characters so far have been pretty cool and the main character’s personality is absolutely amazing. Never read anything like it and I desperately need more.
I liked this novel i am in chapter 20 the latest one in the time of this review and i liked this novel and i hope this novel get picked.....
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This is a story with potential. I like the plot, I like the characters, and I like the world background. However, there is one thing that really leaves much to be desired: the writing quality. The words themselves are ok. They are not being spelled wrong. It's the awkward sentence structure you can frequently find, the missing words and the words not fitting the context that really lower the quality of this story. The sad thing is that these problems could be prevented easily. The author needs to do some editing, or get a beta to do it. That way this story could really be up there.
I've seen dozens of variations of this premise, and the only way in which this novel is even remotely original is that the MC is a newcomer to his sect. It still wasn't interesting enough for me to read more than the first few chapters.
when are you going to fix all of your repatting chapters and dno
WRITING QUALITY: 5/5The grammar is really good. The way that this was written was so easy to understand. No unnecessary expositions. Straight to the point just like how I like it. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 4/5It's still too early to judge but I am giving 4/5 because I checked the table of contents and found that the first chap was uploaded a month ago while there are only 13 chaps. I'm not complaining because at the end of the day, I'd still prefer to read the book that updates only once a week but well-written than the other way around. (But I still prefer a well-written daily update.)STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5No need to say anything. Read the first chapter and you'll know. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5They have their own accent, baby! Need I say more? The interactions between characters are believable. Not cardboard cut outs.WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5I can visualize the place as I read. And there are no unnecessary expositions. PS. It was good but I just wished the paragraphs were a tad shorter though you can ignore this one. I just prefer shorter paragraphs. That's why.
Plzz dontt addd hareem it so boring and make MC like some sexual type beast who only wanna **** women nivel is best i lije it and add more poerfull villain