This book is one of a kind. Totally different from the system books I've read. The grammar is excellent and makes reading super fun. At first, I didn't know where Ed and his grandmother disappeared to until I read your note. If only he'd known how hellish choosing to be a system would be, he would have done to the world instead. I hope all his sacrifices and suffering are worth it. There is nothing to criticize about it book it's wonderfully written and the description is splendid. Kudos to the author.
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Good Novel. Keep up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do not stop this novel halfway like everyone else did, i believe in you author !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This looks like it's going to be goooooood I cannot wait to read this book I was drawn in by the synopsis. I so hope I'm not disappointed ??
Amazing set up for a story i really like it especially hayami who is my favourite character. Its also an amazing action with its balance of fights and comedy
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Clarity your writing needs Clarity. You have major show vs tell problems. Your dialogue needs work too. Trust me I've been there practice engaging the senses and inner thought and the story will shine
I love giving 5's to promising novels. The idea is unique and has a lot of potential. I hope you could proofread it in the future as that's the only concerning thing I found while reading.
The novel was very good and i was hooked on it but i am disappointed in mc character transformation.He is a serial killer with no emotion towards anyone and now he has a bottom line.In the initial chapters he was cold blooded, calculative and will do anything as long as it benefits him and later his character is being changed into a typical beta mc.i was really happy to find this book initially but now it's just another disappointing webnovel.
Really love this novel. I love the two best friends’ dynamic and how they try to stick to the script…and fail the next minute and just went in guns blazing. Nathan wouldnt have needed to bash himself lololol.Well, speaking of Nathan I guess my only peeve is that he does not get enough screentime? I do find Brian charming but Nats has little spotlight. Nevertheless, when it does shine down on him he can be a cool guy. Overall, great novel with a hundred chapters and counting. Its worth your time, campers ヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉ