I stopped at chapter 3.When I started chapter 1, I really liked and enjoyed it and thought this might be a good novel I will until the end.Chapter 3 killed the story for me:- The MC's avatar race is human(insanely boring) and having only the choice of being human, mad the title of the chapter such a scum- The MC's choice of customisation(=basically no customisation at all) is already proving how boring the MC' character is that I have lost all desire of wanting to read anything further about him.I can't understand why the author chose such customisation, because for me, the charm of game avatar customisation is that you can choose to customise the avatar however you want and BECOME whoever you want in that game. If it is the same as your real-life self, then why bother even playing the game instead of just living out your real-life?
this is a good read. the mc is strong and smart. even if he is a cliche good protagonist iits till good . he know his own weakness and strength other characters gets a chance to shine. its not just about a mc showing his strength
The book is great, first chapter got me wanting more although Simon made me sad at first ? then boom! he's in this dangerous world and has changed. Author your grammar is on point, world building is okay . The book has a future. keep it up.
Hello! I am the author of this novel!I rated my novel based on my opinions and since I am a newbie at being a writer, my grammar is going to be messy so just comment about the wrong grammar on the paragraphs or something like suggestions.The story development is kind of fast but there is always an event that will occur in the future.As for the character design, I think I did a good job too since I planned this thing a very long time ago. Like the MC's messy personality.As for the updates, I can notify you if I can't update for a day or two. But it is somehow... rare.The schedules are always one chapter per day at 00:00 or midnight.Lastly, for the world background. I feel like I am interested in it, too.
If you ask what bad writing means I would show you this novel's plot. Seriously, looking for just a thing that have sense is harder than find a unicorn's horn.
Thanks for the novel author, now i need 500+ chapters, give me please, 21 chapter is too low, why is discovered this too early, :( :(Thanks for the novel author, now i need 500+ chapters, give me please, 21 chapter is too low, why is discovered this too early, :( :(
An enjoyable read with a good world background and character development.
what are these reviewers on? the translation is not bad at all. Anyway, the story is pretty good in the first 20 chapters.
the book has great potential. however, it is in desperate need of someone to proof read and grammar check. almost every paragraph has issues in that department.
You know, I gotta give the writer their props. They know how to write a story. I’ve genuinely enjoyed this novel. I haven’t been on this app long, but I have been on it long enough to know that there are a lot of books like this. That being said this one stands out because it’s not afraid to be unique. At least not in a way that confuses the audience/readers. I can’t how many time I’ve laughed out loud reading this novel. I’ve had genuine reading it. I think it’s a great recommendation. Good job author!!
I'll be honest, this review will obviously have some author bias.I personally feel this is an epic story. It tells the story of someone who has known struggle all their life, suddenly thrust into a brand new world, and losing everything once more.It's also a redemption tale, and one that should resonate with any reader that picks it up.Or, I hope so.Now, a major criticism many readers will give is the slow pace. However, give it up to the 10-12th chapter, and the current will flow much faster. It would do you good to just read the story and enjoy Liu's adventure.Another criticism would be Liu's pettiness and personality display at the early point of the novel. Remember, even if he's reincarnated, it doesn't mean he's one wise and mature sage. He was bred in a cruel environment which makes him selfish, petty, and very self-centered. Obviously, with character development, he grows.Other than that, I think it all boils down to individual taste. Please don't unreasonably hate on this book just because it doesn't do what YOU want. I'd like to hear your opinions through comments or reviews. I'm always willing to grow and learn. Thank you all for reading.
i really like this book .....i just dont know why can't webnovel select books with good ratings instead of choosing trash like genius system.......so sad that many good books doesn't make it