I love this novel. It's so hilarious with situations the MC who is innocent, naive, and kind-hearted money grubber gets into and his equally innocent system.
Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
so like me, you also write using the first pov narrative... but this style is only meant for story with a nuance of comedy or to be exact, the English words should be casual and entertaining because the one that is speaking is the characters, not the author. Too much description is also a no no to this style.. why? because if you tell a story yourself, you won't yap about everything you saw right? However the content is interesting,, keep it up!!
Beautiful work by the author. You could really picture the intense scenes in your head with ease which is a must. I hope to see the piece flourish and gain the viewership it deserves. Keep up the amazing work!
The writing is incomprehensible. It has a female protagonist with Space that can fit a huge base filled with a hundred thousand people. It has a water source and large swathes of arable land. But I just can't go on reading this novel because of the grammar and writing style.
Rateing befor the story starts Yay can't wait to read you make great books.
Not that good
although the work has sensitive themes, it is very good, it has an interesting plot, and it has a lot of potential if the Author doesn't get lost along the way.
Author serious question is it a harem??...
I loved it, because it has it's own style and pacing definitely try reading it for sure you will enjoy it ❤️
Read up to 10 chapters. Not my type of novel ... So I'm gonna drop it but 5 stars cos Author seems to be know his stuff.....
Again, the Author has a great way of describing everything, the use of words, the grammar, the storyline, the title— seamless. Can't wait for more chapters!??