is the new translation good? if yes, we can request admin to update this again
At chapter 214 the MC has to either reward them with Python of Death, T-Rex,Eye of Thunder or Wing Of Death( Btw they're from "Fatal Shots" ) instead even tho they are a bit too much but the MC can just ask the system to re-adjust the attributes plus the names are wayyyy cooler (✧◡✧)
CH 847. I hate it when an author changes fundamental character traits out of the blue, just as a way to move the plot forward "“F*ck, we are surrounded!” Seeing that all their potential exits are blocked, the Quan Zhen Sect was in low spirits."They already suspected this would happen, they had amble warning that something like this would happen. Fearless being so smart and all etc. etc. And then later we hear that "no other guild had been able to put so much pressure on them". What a load of rubbish when it's their own stupid unintelligent actions that brought them to this situation. This was such an obvious setup from the start that a 5 year old could have seen through it, let alone someone like Fearless who should have an IQ above 180 and be a master of strategy and all things shady and questionable. Stupid.
Do wizards not need to eat, just wondering.
Please round off.. it’s getting annoying
This is basically one of the best. The characters were fun, I love the side characters. Especially LQ's pets. I especially love how LQ didn't become irrational because of love and what remains still is the strengthening of the base and the relationship of every characters. The background of the world is of course, dark, because it is a post-apocalyptic world, and how they managed to make it into a comedy is amazing. Villains died, some died too easily. I wanted more pain, lol. The romance part here is not that strong and I like it that way. Anyways, this is 10/10 because of bowwow's naughtiness, ling ling's cuteness, and teng's troublemaking.
The beginning was a bit tragic but it's good thing we knew what leads her to enter the dark world. Other than that, the punctuation needs to be fixed as they're some missing in the dialogues. And, I'm curious, why do you keep using the ';' symbol?
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now before I actually go into my review I will say this the first 30 chapters are a pain to get through. but there is reason for this and it is explained in the story later on why the main character acts as such and why this system acts like a oddly stupid system as well. now onto my review. overall this is an absolutely great novel. we get to see the main character come with and spoilers for those wondering. We see the main character come to terms with the fact that he is no longer a human and is instead of Beast and we really see him embody that. he no longer tries to act like a human and he doesn't even try to regain a human form even though it's been confirmed that he can multiple times, because even though he has attachment to his old life he doesn't want it to shape the way he approaches his new life. and sure the story can seem slow and I agree that is a bit drawn out at points but when you're actually reading the story more than one chapter at a time and you aren't just waiting for daily releases and you have like 30 chapter stockpiled to read you don't even notice that sometimes some bits are longer than they should be because the author writes really well. And the story truly gets you drawn in and all the information you are fed is given to you when it is important or before something important happens and then from there on you can start connecting the dots why things that happened previously in the story moved in the manner they did. If you look at any of the other reviews I leave you'll see I'm usually extremely harsh on stories that I like and you this is one of those stories where I don't have much to say about it other than it's a great book. out of all the 500 books I have in my library and probably only the 250 a readout of the already 300 books I've previously read this is one of those books that I always keep coming back to. Sure I don't reread the story like I do some other novels but what's really good about this story is even if I leave it alone for two or three months just to get that nice stockpile of 92 over 100 chapters I still know what's going on in the story because it doesn't rely on cliches. a lot of the story is new and different at least when the main character actually gets past his non cultivating period. and you know I could go on singing praises for this book but I just thought I'd leave my honest review then if anyone right at this point let me know how you feel about the book 2 because this is one of the few that I truly do think deserves more of the following than it has even though I don't think it's as good of a book is say incident man in the apocalypse or the Magus in the Wizard World it's still a great book.
Hi author here chapter 5 has been modified so please read it again... and if you like this novel please let me know through comments and rating this novel
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