Wait. I’m I allowed to review my own story? I’m already writing one so too late now! Paramnesia is a story I started working on about a year and a half ago. Back then, I originally planned to draw a comic for this story. Which is why the first few chapters were kinda off, I had a bit of trouble turning a comic into a novel. Btw, if you look closely at the cover you’ll see the words ‘pathway to another world’ under the title, that’s because that was the original name of this story and that cover was from a long time ago so it still had that title. If anyone is curious, here’s the dictionary definition of Paramnesia. par·am·ne·sia ˌperamˈnēZH(ē)noun PSYCHIATRYa condition or phenomenon involving distorted memory or confusions of fact and fantasy, such as confabulation or déjà vu.I like using names that have meanings so if you want to know mean about the characters personalities you could search up their names. The only characters who are named after real people are the male and female main characters. Wow! This was probably longer than my chapters! Thanks for reading!
I don't like the story progress. MC is making a few mistake that shouldn't be made I guess author want to kill off his grandfather to make "revenge as a goal to make MC hunger for stregth" it is so lamp. He meet a girl live a lone inside a forest really? what the point of meeting her since no romantic could happen or anything related to MC. If it is a slice of life novel I don't mind it but it is a cultivation novel.
Totally great sci-fi novel i’ve ever read!!????. Please keep writing! I’ll always support your workkkkkkkkkk!! ????Hope you create an Ebook version in the future. Love
its goooooooooooddd Translation Quality: I can read it just fine.Updating Stability: uh um... hmmm i- 4-5 stars? I cant put 4.5 soo yeah. Its alright its not like everyday but its not that long of a wait ish...Story development: i can see good potential like the snake pits growth, the meeting with the other people who reincarnated into the new world, or just how she is a monster(snake) in a dungeon(?) i forgot some details not the brightest mind here. Also so far so good. Oh and i cant forget that wasp arc thingy... potential ml? Ehhhh??Character Design: uh nice its pretty cool. Its a nice twist that the kids teacher became their system. Also at the beginning, whats up with that dude who killed all the other students like that shii was crazy. It was not truck-kun, no it was a mf crazy stuckup prince syndrome guy who killed bc huh? I dont rmb the details no more but gosh darn does that still ring a bellWorld background: umm its a world.. a fantasy world mind you soo uh details? Dont rmb them.. i think its pretty structured i think... yeahAnywho overall rate it’ll say 4.4 BUT i personally think its either a 4.4-4.5 ... sooo yup so its a recommended from me eee
This is one of those novels wich makes a magic apocalypse good like people are not overly dumb since characters kinda resemble ctual humans instead of what most do with pure idiots as side characters
Honestly this novel isn’t writing in any way that makes sense, the MC is and old man that’s worked a desk job for 40 odd years but can swing a big sword around and kill monsters with ease. The grammar is bad and the MC is just getting more OP with every other chapter. The only good thing about this story is the uploading speed which is pretty good but man spend an hour or two proof reading because it’s still an alright premise it’s just that it’s too unedited.??u200d♂️
So good it makes me wanna sad , excited, happy and angry for the characters plz keep it up -for the 140 word count-//bsjdudushdhjxhxbshxjdjsbxbsjdndbhxjdbdvshsueeukxnc
This is my first reading of a litrpg novel, but I can say this novel is promising. Narrated in the first-person perspective of the main character.But what needs to be regretted is punctuation that is often forgotten.I began to confuse the narrator or the main character's thoughts.But overall is a good story so far, update more chappy and the reader will be happy!
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The story is good. Hope the best for the novel.. Author san... Cayok2... Gambatee... Love to read more.????????????????
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Broken VR Game (the balance, programming, and hardware are all poorly done) + unnecessary (RE:) Time Travel. Then he jumps back into the machine that killed him. I've heard "The MC's actions were unrealistic" before, but I'm not going to read about the multi-Darwin-Award winner. The only reason I flipped through the first few chapters, was that I thought it was Portal Fiction. It's not.