is this his a Harem ?
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This story is really good. The progress is going good.. Author has done good work explaining relationship between characters. The MC is Op and the update stability is the best. Author keep up the good work and let the chapters rolling.
Despite the fact that I like the story there are many glaring issues. The cultivation system doesn’t make sense. You can either be a martial artist, a mage, or both. In order to increase your rank you must open up meridians which there are nine of. However if you practice both then you need to share so the ratio becomes 5/4 which means you are weaker than a pure mage and martial artist when instead you should be stronger so the concept doesn’t make sense. Instead it should be different concepts such as using dark energy to increase bodily functions, and strength for martial artists and for mages they could convert that energy into mana which is stored somewhere in the body. The author also creates these “spaces” that are very confusing and quite frankly shouldn’t exist.
4.5 stars?! What? Admittedly, this isn't a complete garbage tier novel. However, it is a fairly low tier one. The "comedy
The writing style of the author is kinda jarring, the sentences don't flow and there are times where I need to reread a sentence. It disturbs my reading immersion and just lowers the quality of the novel. Idk about you guys but the grammar and just the way an author writes sentences plays a big part in my reading experience, hence why I rated this low. I'm also rating this lower just to balance the rating of the novel since I've noticed that most of the reviews aren't proper reviews at all.
I love it so much thanks for the update
flawless, hardly any errors, please update more chapters
Can't wait for the next chapter
Interesting and keeps me waiting for the nxt chapters, suspense of what going to happen nxt . more scenes between Marshall and Stella please
Conner really through me for a loop there, I always knew there was something special about him. They way he went out though had me crying.
another awesome piece of storytelling. I love the spunky and headstrong female lead. This story grips you from the start with its intricate plot and leaves you wanting more.