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In case you're wondering, there are people who are interested in this novel, and I was quite put out that you might be discontinuing this novel, and I hope you don't, and I just don't want you to go down the road of discontinuing the novel because it's quite well written, and I just voted, and I'm pretty sure the 'men of culture' would hate to see you stop this novel ;) ;)
I read the prologue and the first chapter. I must say author put a lot of effort in it and it's well written. The quality of the novel is top notch and I didn't find much errors in the vocabulary as well. The only drawback I found is that there is no attention grabber moment in the first chapter. Most readers skip the novel after reading the first chapter and synopsis. If the synopsis is interesting enough to let them read more, they'll stay for more chapters. But in this, everything is confusing. The story started off in the present with a little bit of information of MCs back story and her family's tragic end seven years ago. Other than that, nothing interesting came up that intrigued me to read more. Even the synopsis is short with no information about the main plot that might interest someone. Dear Author, your writing quality is good enough to reach readers attention but if the storyline is not interesting. No one will read it. So, try to put things in the first chapter or synopsis like showing a trailer so that more readers will enjoy your novel with proper understanding what's going on. I know it's just a first chapter but put some elements that is attention grabber. Also, please reedit your synopsis and book cover so that it will attract readers indirectly. Thank you! I'm looking forward for your positive response.
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Hello I am a system. I have rules. They are there so that you, the MC, don't get way too OP too fast. Hm you say that I have exceptions for the rules. That is right. When the author does not want to waste brain power on actually thinking things trough he is able to change the rules at will.Why? I am just a system. The author is my creator, not the other way around. This doesn't make for a good story and makes every dangerous situation appear like the author intentionally screwed over the MC. This doesn't make for a good story? The MC is a brainless fool? Yes, of course. This is a power fantasy.
I've read the raws, and this is perhaps on of the bests. Its basically release that witch, but in a cultivation world. Characters are nice, and the mc actually has a brain, without having Wikipedia like memory.
Nice concept and plot, romrcommended to anyone who likes to read and is enjoyable and relaxing. I hope you make it to your writing career....................
Supporting the author. I like the first chapter and the system seems interesting. The only complaint— Give more updates. Expecting the story to do well. Good luck.
Sir, slavery is banned in Blue Star.Therefore, you will now become a slave.
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I'm not good with praise so all I can say is this is a really good novel. It's so refreshing to see such good grammar on this website. The story and world background seem good so far. I can only hope the author doesn't drop or slow down in updates.
I always leave writing quality at four for anyone because you should always strive to be better. It's nothing personal. Your education as a writer is never finished. Other than that it was nice to read a coherent story, that made sense and I could follow.