Hello, the author here.This is a gag novel.There is little to no story, and the system is a sadistic, fujoshi. If this isn't your thing, then kindly leave. What I can tell you, however, is that Jin Yahui will never be OP. In fact, he's weak and is scared of everything. He's human. If you expect some OP protagonist, kindly leave. There isn't that much world-building, and for that I'm sorry. I'm an ******* author, and I'm trying my best. If you don't like the story, then tell it in a civilized manner. I don't appreciate a one-star when I at least deserve two ;)¯_(ツ)_/ ¯
All around this story is average. It's a cultivation novel with typical cliches and a few typical features, but I haven't seen anything new yet. Sometimes that's good, because you just want to have an enjoyable read, and indeed some people love how "fast paced" the novel is, but not me.The grammar is near flawless but the author's command of the English language is lacking. Moments seem to drag on forever and the writing seems to circle itself in a repetitive manner. These things happen mostly due to a bland, unvarried word choice. For readers like me, with higher expectations, I'm simply bored from reading it.Plot-wise the story is average too. The world building doesnt seem very deep and there aren't very many characters, as if the author doesnt want to put the work in to making a large world. The time period and cultures aren't established (with either the use of objects, technology, or references). Nothing.Furthermore the magic system is lacking. Even by chapter 30, when the MC has broken through two planes, I still dont know what the planes are, what the consequences of cultivating improperly are, what the elements are, or how the elements are used (in combat) ect. Even by chapter 30 there has been only one fight and it was totally lackluster. Missed opportunity for demonstrating the magic system in action.Over all I would say average. I am still very impressed with the grammar, but there's unfortunately no character or charm to the writing. So even though it isn't distracting from the story, it is still detracting. Author should go back to rework scenes and actively use synonyms. Every adjective in a chapter should be unique. Every verb should be specifically chosen to best describe an action.
It's a great novel to read. it's pretty much good for like 300 chapters, until the plot got more complicated with new characters like joker and angelica and v. I'm not a hater for complicated plots but I have already got my fill with all those complicated tropes. I tried to read it till 400 chapters but then another twist and turns occured like death of his parents and Evie's father's appearance and the usual 'family taking away MC's love interest by force or threatening and MC's quest to get her back trope got and made the already bored me to get more bored of all this plot stuffing in together. The COC reference in guild war was kinda lame and I mostly skipped them and the plot about dating saya was not that interesting, well it's a nice plot but it could've been better if she wasn't that desperate.
I really like this novel! I got hooked since the beginning, and I was so disappointed when the chapters began to become locked, lol. But, I would gladly unlock the chapters because this is such an amazing novel!
This novel is what i would call a good read, with only a few chapters to its name its interesting and leaves me wanting more, lets all hope we can get some more chapters ?
I really tried until chapter 16 , but I can't read such crap anymore... It's just mind-blowing, the \\"author\\" has no clue about the mafia or relationships for that matter... They are all listening (quietly) or talking quietly!!! WTF, this is BS and the \\"book\\" has over 100 chapters !!!
Loved this book can’t wait to read the next boo
A must read! You will not want to stop reading!!
great story, but a bit pricey for such short chapters
BORING!!!!!
This was a really good book to read it had a bit of everything suspense thriller, romantic and an interesting story line The relationship between them started off as a bit weird and as they got to know each other it turned out to be the best trusting relationships I wish there were more chapters
Enjoyed reading this one, really funny