As of Chapter 23, this story is fantastic. A great mix of comedy, action and slice of life. Grammar is good, story flows well, side characters aren't like dead fish.
for a new book there’s a lot already written. i’m really excited for this power couples journey. patiently waiting for the next update
it's really good. the author is making the Mc story more detailed so we don't just get oh hey look I'm born undead let's kill them all. I like it. so around after 50 chapters you'll to it. there are some grammar mistakes like him her he she but it's easily fixable and not as exaggerated as people are saying on here. instead of what they are saying "which", it's fine we all know what they mean. it's not nearly as bad as monster integration
I have ready many of Elyon's stories and I always enjoy reading them all. I have read quite a few chapters of this story and I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!
Author, don't put a few exclamation marks. (Yes!! Yeah!! Oh okay!!) It's just stupid. And I don't understand why you added punishments to the system, they don't even motivate, the main character already has enough motivation. The main character can't even refuse... He is, in fact, just a weak-willed slave of the system.
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Honestly, one of the best novels that i’ve read.Few minor errors with writing but they can be overlooked, thats all ive got to say.I’ll give Power stones author! Just dont drop!
Come back we miss u it been so long the last time we seen u when will U come back to us
Phenomenal! Easily the most VIVID story I have read on WebNovel. I have rarely encountered such writing quality that can take me on the journey alongside the characters. I can not say how far above the quality is of this story is above any that I have read on this platform. Well done Author, well done. I am looking forward to seeing more of this world that you paint so well.
It's not a terrible novel nor is this novel anything exciting. Just an average novel that is strong with the Cringe and the Tropes. Would recommend this to those who are killing time waiting for the better novels to update. Anyway I thought this would be good, I'm going back to New Age of Summoners
First things first, the waifus. What can I say except being great and cute. Also each Character has a pretty good personality, so GG for that Author. Amd the plot itself progresses with so many twists that it makes it mouch more interesting. Also the MC is a Chad. Will definitely recommend this novel if you're a fan of romance novels with a cold MC ?
A short info...Well, as you may see, this is yet another system novel. And with hundreds or thousands of similar genres, I have skipped most of the introductions regarding the system and made it appear natural for the readers as though the system isn't new to them, which is, that's probably the case.The world background is about people on earth playing a certain game, unaware that they are actually playing (living) in a certain world somewhere in the boundless universe whenever they play the game. They don't know that their invasion of the world inside the game is actually their invasion into the other world. For more info, please read the novel.The MC is impassive and cold, but not all the time. He has emotions. And he sometimes laughs or goes mad depending on the situation or what he feels like. But of course, he is not someone like a psychopath who would laugh for little to no reason at all.For a certain reason, the MC can't level up and will remain a level 1 player until the novel ends. To know why can't he level up, and to see how will he overcome all the challenges and overwhelm all the other players and NPCs, please read the book.By the way, he has different abilities. He can control his blood, bones, hair, body, and shadow. He can also control the world's mana. Since there are a lot of restrictions on him because he is a level 1 player, he resorts to other methods to get stronger. Please read the synopsis for more info. And if you want more, please read the novel. Thank you!The MC isn't a hero nor is he a villain. But, of course, he also has some sense of humanity both in reality and in-game. If he sees someone bullying or abusing their power, it is difficult for him to just stand idly, especially if those who are around him are being concerned. Chances are he will remove the weeds down to their very roots.Anyone can be his friends, but they can be his enemies as well. He also tends to work alone and relies on his own ability. If he can't hold on anymore, the first one he will lean on is his family. That said, he is extremely protective of his family as well as of those who are close to him.Lastly, the general idea of the story is...If you are weak and feel that the world is burdening you, cheer up dude, there is always another way to overcome your weaknesses.┻┻︵¯(ツ)/¯︵┻┻I can't believe you read this. Since you've done so anyway, why don't you add this to your library and start reading?<(￣︶￣)↗ Have a good day!