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The story is written amazingly the world is well done and the author did a very good job bring it to life the plot is well done also. Keep up the good work author!!.
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love story so far. well written thought out line for where the system and mc are going. ???????????????✊???????✊??????????
Sounds like it has good potential. Definitely hoping it gets picked. Overall sounds good and probably one of the better books that have popped up.
This is such a lovely (epic) story so far
it was obvious that there will always be a delay in the final moment... typical reader-bait plot, author treating the reader like a fish... I've seen many xinxias like this. You have to read until the end for a total romantic dishonor. Besides that this mc is pretty disgusting, if you analyze well, he won everything for free without effort, and still doesn't have much personality, despite being in the category of romances nominated for men, it's clearer a female domination with a dubious emaciated mc .
The work has a very good idea. A well summarized but relatively strange synopsis may not please many, so I suggest you take a look at it later. I can't give too much of a review given there isn't much content available at the moment, however. here are some things about the work: The writing is normal/okay and doesn't get in the way, but it could be improved. Grammatical errors are constant and, if possible or necessary, I highly recommend using tools that can help you fix this. Also remember to improve the spacing you use between lines; in some situations it was a bit confusing to understand the descriptions.The idea is cool and can be worked on to improve over time. I'll try to stay here on your journey, and I'll come back later to make further observations about the work. Finally, sorry for the somewhat "superficial" review, and keep up the good work.
Me likey. Seems like an easy going book but fun whist I like and seems like the mc is op in money sens. hope there isnt faceslapping and Hope for more chapters
This mfker removed a lot of parts from the raw, not cool at all, the raw novel is great, but this mfker removed those parts pity 5 stars for everything except the translate
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Having spent hundreds upon hundreds of dollars on spirt stones on this site to read books I can honestly say that this book ranks in the top 5 I have ever read here. The MC is ridiculously OP but yet not in a overbearing uninteresting way like other stories. There is humor, face slapping, a huge mystery, even some sadness. The pacing and development of both the characters are world is godly. Highly recommend this story, and prepare yourself for a rollarcoster of emotions when reading.