This story is pretty good. Even though it has a few grammatical errors but they aren't so bad that it stops you from enjoying the story. The character, the world, the plot, everything's really great.
I tried I really did, but seriously the Mc is pretty much unkillable the moment he starts the story the rest is face slapping and sucking up to the mc after he kills high level beasts no one else near his city could. Then when he goes out beasts are really strong for no reason it literally says why is such a strong beast so near the walls then never brings it up again they're to busy face slapping and having important people suck up to the mc. There's also the fact that him having a huge storage space doesn't make people think he's part of a faction somehow "this expert must be at the peak level because his storage is huge, but he must be new because he asked for a knife to cut some materials." In conclusion the translation work is okay, but the story itself is not very good at all
The MC is such a pushover with women. He let's them take advantage of him and can't ever go against them...also, as I'm reading more and more of these genre novels, I'm realizing that all you need is a pretty face with a chilly personality in order to use the MC. Is that the ideal type of girl that Chinese guys want?
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It’s really good! Especially the ending. I was really impressed at the last few chapter. Usually a lot of novel ends abruptly and don’t have a clean ending but this one is really different. Wow when I read the last few chapters all the character development occured on MC began to make sense. I was filled with question before that when I read his actions. So good, 5 stars!
I find this book very fun, keep up the good work author!This book has new elements that I never thought would be in a VRMMORPG novel. I also like how there were little hints in the first chapter that correlate to the whole story. Keep up the good work!
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Great novel wish there were more chapters and faster updates.
Great novel wish there were more chapters and faster updates.
Great novel wish there were more chapters and faster updates.
Its not bad.... I kept reading on to know if the mc will be the main but nop... u don't focus in mc at all ?..sorry my english is bad I hope u can understand this !!!!! I request the author to look read The greatest of all time...I swear it's the best novel..
Hello everyone, this is the author here giving his thanks after publishing 200 chapters in total. I appreciate everyone that had given their support on my take of a VRMMORPG Novel that is quite different than most. And by that case, there are some that didn't enjoy it and I'm sorry that the novel isn't to your liking.Now let's go over to what I think are my pros and cons.For Pros: This novel takes the slow-pace route because I'm trying my best to weave a storyline that actually kind of make sense and not rushed things. Hence, some might mistaken me as trying to increase word count or stall purposely to earn more money, but that's not true. I'm really trying my best to write this VRMMORPG genre novel as it's my first attempt ever writing one, so it's given that not everything is perfect. I can only pray that you will give me a chance to improve my writing crafts.For cons: My novel doesn't focused heavily on the player grinding daily but actually brings in some reality to it, and for that, it might bore some readers because I convey the real world and game world. In addition to that, there might be plot holes occasionally since author is a human being too and tends to forget some of the things he wrote. For that, I would be grateful if readers would kindly remind the author and not blast him right away for forgetting things. TLDR: This is written by the author in March 3, 2023 to give his appreciation and thanks toward the readers that have continuously support me.
Their is a novel like this still in raws. It should be its original. This novel is like the originals fan fiction. Everything is the same except the r rated scenes and the ntr. Check it out. The world building is great too.
It's seems this is a translation of a Chinese novel, and it includes all the Chinese novel clichés, such as face-slapping, face-slapping and more face-slapping, followed by some super repetitive filler, all topped off by an incredibly stupid MC. If you're into all that then I guess this is for you.