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Been waiting for updates for several months already. Please finish this book.
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love it.please update it soon.
Story compelling and hard to stop reading. Would love more and more updates ASAP
whose, amazing beginning
I was hoping for bonus chapters or epilogue but nevertheless it is a beautiful story will be waiting for your next story
There are mispronouns for Malia or other female characters in the first few chapters. But still quite understandable. Better u fix it and i give u five stars for ur hardworks. Keep writing
amazing book. A must read. most importantly it is different from the usual betrayal books. just loved it!
hey guys. so I just want to point out Alvaro speaks slang meaning his English is not proper from the beginning. I know it looks like mistakes and I'm thankful you guys are trying to correct me because I do take notes of corrections so that I can polish up my work. :)
Love it. Intriguing. Great story base and terrific writing. please do not take months to update again. Your story is magical, it has romance, suspense, action and intrigue.
I am giving this one a shot, interesting
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