kagenatsu
Yeah i feel you who’s going to fall in love with a fucking stud horse im sorry hahha I cursed
amazing stories you've got here tillybelle
this is the highest rate i ever gave, lol
So far, so good. It´s been more of a slice of life than action but i think it was necessary to build the history, characters and their relationships. I´m very curious about how you will develop their powers because mithology is a bit of vast topic but I think it will be a good and will improve even more your writting skills!
Urban novels with superpowers are a bit rare, so maybe that´s the reason that has a bit less feedback!
Continue with the good work !
tLet me straight with you. You are reading this wondering if you should start this journey or whether it is going to be full of cliches and plot armor. Yes, I know there are other stories that have tried the global lord and extracting enemies stuff before, and you might be concerned about it being a carbon copy of something else. I had that concern too, but I can assure you this is not one of those stories. Sure there is no harem, but that allows the story to function on the important things like getting the system right without turning into a complete power fantasy…tLet me get right to it. This is a really compelling story with an unconventional protaganist who just wants to find his way no matter the cost. Despite all of the adversity in his life, Micheal Fang just wants to find a way to thrive in a world gone mad. Tag along as he uses his ability to face his cursed lot in life while building a retinue of friends and allies to weather the storm with. Things do not always work out for him, but he always tries to find a way to move forward regardless.tI highly recommend you read this story, and if you don’t like it then you can come back here to complain although I have no doubt you will be thanking me later for sending you on this journey.
A solid football novel, with good development of the mc and realistic pathways of development within the football industry. I am looking forward to where its future goes.
I love this book I took a day and a half to finish 140+ chapters and I can say that if you're into op-female Mc, Gods, and VR then you're at the right place. I honestly believe that this novel deserves this rating I do believe he needs a proofreader or editor tho since some words are misspelled but overall good story and can't wait to see more updates
Is thare Romance..? in this story.? anything.? Seggs.? love.? other things.?
come back come back......... . ...........
This was amazing ngl best story I have ever read in my life hope there will be more updates. This has everything I wanted climax sorrow excitement and so much more THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL (isaac)
I read the first 40 chapters and it can be seen that the author is new to writing. There is nothing wrong with this but in the comments, the author tries to justify the inconsistencies in the novel with some bs reason and the readers seem to lap it up.This is probably due to the nature of such a book being ero. But sadly, the intimate scenes after the first left me feeling cringe or nothing at all.The author set out an enticing world I was will to read more of, but after these 40 chapters, I'm not very sure anymore.
The quality of the translation after chapter 40 is mtl.Paying just to read mtl, like why. cba to struggle to read this.I was enjoying the story so far but 40 isn't enough to recommend.
