so far i like it [img=recommend] keep it up
I’m gonna list a few points right off the bat: Translation is horrendous coming from a site that pushes these kind of novels.
Speeches are sentences that doesn’t even read smoothly. As if one just translated purely from the rates with little to minor editing done on this part.
Characters are not that memorable since I’ve read ahead and i must say, really disappointing personas.
I would only read this if god and hell says so.
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I seen good reviews so I tried this, but I just cant. Its basically just another sh*tty chinese manhua but with sci-fi plot and better grammer. And the writing style make my head hurt trying to read it.
Why? What happened?
What the hell the author has slowly became insane from chapters 400-700.
It’s not chapters anymore it’s list.
After chapter 200 you will no longer be able to take this seriously (well i never have) but this is on a different level. Instead of investing things to write this novel properly, the author just gave up like an artist looking back on his portrait and realizing the proportions are wrong, instead of fixing it the author just splashed bottles of paint in it like he doesnt care. Skip the tower and the worldwide competition since they basicaly have no value to the story. Thats 150 chapters wasted. 150 chapters of list of powers, list of upgraded powers. List of countries. The whole story became a list. I usually love information overload but this is on a whole new level. Lazy overload and reliance to b*llsh*t maybe. The author has forgotten to take the novel seriously as there are dbz references every single chapter and fart jokes. Comedy for 5 year olds.
Money grubber MCs are my favourite frfr relatable
Yh but you have to realize that if the author done that then it would just be another trash novel with a generic system op mc
Well the first 500 chapters are really good. I read this when I just started reading light novels. But it was discontinued. I found it in a machine translated site and it has 8k chapters. It become repetitive and confusing, its not descriptive of fight scenes anymore. It became like any other wuxia that been discarded. It sucks
i wouldn't say it has a bad ending it just is not conclusive.
I think the story is very good, very solid, by the end of it most of the big plot holes are at least given an explanation. If i can remember correctly since it has been a long time since i finished this. it has potential for a very good second season.
that's why i didn't read last 7 chapters