It is hard to pace the story and especially decide how long the writers want the story to be. Sometimes the novels end due to the writer such as running out of ideas or burnout of writing the novel for a long time. They also want to make sure they don’t drag out the ending and make it boring towards the end when they put a lot of effort into the story. In the end, we kind of just have to accept the ending for what it is.
Wrong novel bro.
Hi I was reading this book on wattpad but it go removed found it interesting so decided to search for it on browser found it hope will be able to finish it this time. But till the amount I read the book it was very interesting and lovely
The Combat is just boring and stale ( and I don't mean the fights are badly written, its just the same thing over and over again in different environments ), I might be biased, cause I extremely dislike shapeshift/transformation skills etc, like turning into a beast or any body part like your hand into paws/claws is just not interesting and fking ugly, so I only made it to 150+ chapters cause its currently my favorite genre "Reincarnated into Game World as NPC etc.", thought the Author was cooking something up with the Shadow Doppelganger hinting towards Shadow Sorcerer, the fights were pretty stale which was to be expected considering he is a Ranger cosplaying a Assassin, slash here, dodge there, slash slash and done, but if you were to add Shadow Magic/Skills then it would spice things up, but instead he becomes a Shapeshift Sorcerer, turns into a Bear and waves his Paws around. ( both his Nature Spells are also transformation skills, so I might be a bit butthurt )
Alright the tier 6 arc is really trying my patience if this was in the first half of the novel I probably would have dropped this. But since I’m 80% done with the novel I’m just gonna power through it. Really disappointed with the direction the author went with this. This novel used to be a lot better I don’t even like reading the battles anymore (long, drawn out, and with powers that don’t even make sense anymore) I just skip to the end when FX wins. Also Ulpian in this arc literally doesn’t make sense, so stupid. Why author, why do you this. Wasting so much potential with this crap arc.
This novel is quite good though I would say that the pace is too fast that seems quite unrealistic for a person who undergone such adversities. The side characters seeing the MC's achievements and acknowledged him without much or enough suspicions about knowing too much suddenly despite of investigations about him, they are still in awe, their reactions is too predictable.I understand MC's predicament why he's in rush to take actions but his sudden unpredictable behavior doesn't affect much those side characters to notice that he's quite abnormal. Well, this is quite the typical Shounen type of MC.By the way, I just happened to finished Lord of the Mysteries. Seeing 'Amon' again here made me goosebumos, lol. Amon is everywhere, his name made me shivered like, tf... Tgis really caught me off-guard.
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This is a nice story, indeed. I agree with all the positive reviews here. I fell in love with the author's narrative style from the synopsis. I don't usually read sci-fi, however, I honestly anticipate how this tale will unfold. The MC snatched my heart, because I can deeply connect with him.
It is an excellent novel, but I believe there are some points to be improved. Most of your audience has the maturity to understand that the world is not just black and white, you don't need to have a moral advantage in every dispute. There is no need to create second-rate villains to justify the MC attitudes, we understand that human beings are complex beings, we are selfish and ambitious, we always want more, the MC enemies are people who want more for their family or people, not necessarily stupid and 'evil', I'm not defending them, they should all be killed with their families, I just ask that you don't insult my intelligence. Another point I noticed is the absence of harem etiquette, I'm not asking to go out collecting pokemons, but looking at the pragmatic side, most alliances at that time are through marriage, especially someone who wants to be emperor, accepting concubines.
I love this history ♡♡ 10/10I love this historyI love this historyI need more xdIn spanish : la trama es muy interesante, me engancha y me hace esperar por más. Sigue asi autora-nim ♡♡/
I like how the story is going so far. Maybe try using a grammar checker to catch small errors. Looking forward to the next chapter, add oil!
The translation is awful ,this tranlator has ruined alot of novels with poor tranlation that you can get with a simple google translate. Translator 549690339. is doing this so when good translations come out they cant really compete with this fast cookie paced poor translation