Author, just tell me one thing, will Van have one wife or not?
Because, the way his friend's wife are reacting, I don't like it.
i particularly prefer no polygamy or harem for this novel of yours, so if you enlightened me.
I'm not very good at reviewing things, but this is simply a masterpiece. I love everything. The power system. The pacing. The technique the author uses when it comes to flashbacks, it makes me want to know more about the history of this world. I can't get enough.
I like these stories when the soft FL character becomes a baddie. Looking forward to some swift retribution and face slapping .
The story and plot itself is good, but I don't like how the author potrays the female characters. . . I believe those characters are made with the purpose to look like those cliche and goofy-ish anime/manga girls(?) but they sound rather annoying and disturbing. Sometime I just gotta take deep breath and convince myself to not give a shit bout' them. Unfortunately I find them too annoying to just ignore and ends up swearing too much lol.
One more!! I'm so frustrated by how they keep making the female character (with chances to be in his harem or in a relationship) flustered at almost every single moment. Like. . . cant u fucking stop stutering? That sounds incredibly annoying
conclusion: Story and plot ??ok
How they write the female Character ??
half way through the novel and I absolutely love it!! I keep wanting to read more and hate when I have to put it down. So excited to read the rest and you do an awesome job with chapter updates! Keep on writing! loving it!
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Great book
Loved both stories
i honestly thought the same thing getting all 4 hot guys for her...nice one though
Very poor Grammar!
loved all of it!!!! I think its my favourite!!!
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