Review after 120+ Chaps. There are no spoiler, I'll only be brief with what to expect in the Novel.1# The author's writing style is very confusing and the novels premises still seem very unclear.2# You know the feeling of reading cheap Chinese trash novels, well this Novel is not cheap and trash but it gives feeling similar to that, it feels a Mish mash between Chinese and western novels.3# It has very horrible way to describe things, to the readers. It's almost like the author tries to give descriptive view but it's quite confusing and you're expected to understand what it means by ourself, not very comfortable.4# The power system and skills, abilities and what not are very troublesome to understand and comprehend. The Author has to realize that the Average Webnovel reader isn't too much into complicated power system, unless of course if you somehow make the next Shadow slave or even LOTM than that's understandable.Overall, I'd say the author needs to freshen up his writing and articulation skills a bit, I'd suggest watching some tutorials at YouTube it's surprisingly very helpful.That's all I have to say. If anyone wants to read this for OP MC and action intensive plot and lots of chaos and destruction than this isn't for you.
I usually wait for a novel to have around 100 chapters before I read to get a better feel but this one definitely has something special completely caught up currently at chapter 42 only complaint is his seemingly disability to killing to almost a self harm level but I already see that changing keep up the great work.
But he was a man, what i should i call him? Nurseman maybe?
Space was distorted as he appeared in front of me, once more, I ducked and slide under him then fired 9-burst to the joint of his armor.
Those time were very magical for Shimi… After a few minutes, the tea and cake was served… As they were about to take a bite, Voices of villagers were heard… they are heading towards Rose's home!
"I guess a try won't kill me," said Abel as he left Aaron and went to his house.
to stop it from surpassing it. Hardware progress and upgrade-ability
"Es repentino pero pongaze uno de estos, pueden encontrarlos en sus pupitres, tienen 10 min para cambierse"
Only shooting stars break the mold
All that glitters is gold
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Only shooting stars break the mold