YesSo good I have to give the review twice
'ai suivi cette histoire sur RR depuis peu de temps après qu'elle ait commencé, la qualité globale a commencé fort et n'a fait que s'améliorer, et c'est là-haut avec la plus régulièrement publiée des dizaines d'histoires que je suis . Si vous aimez la fantaisie qui ne saute pas le requin, est prêt à se plonger dans des sujets sombres et a une excellente progression de caractère et d'intrigue alors assurez-vous de donner cette histoire une chance.
Currently at chapter 8, I love it! This is a very, very interesting story. Please keep Mr. 'Because i can' a loner. ?
So far its very interesting. mc past suspense and characters are all perfect and also it would be good if the story picks up the pace ( right now it's a little slow). Also, pls update 3-4 times a week in future also. overall very great.
doesn't really matter what people say as long as you want to writejust have fun and do this as a hobbyDon't ask for opinions on how you should write your next chaptersJust follow what your heart saysthis is your novel, be sure to enjoy this process of writing it.but most importanly is just to have fun while you write it
I don't read books randomly but this ... the first page itself caught me.. I am really excited to read it further ✨ amazing work Muriel ?
This story is so interesting. Please drop daily update ?
How about family?
"You mutilated them, you put their heads in their stomachs !?"
"The equipment is ready, Master." Jester said while looking down saluting.
"Do you know what he did to you?"
"Thanks Az." I smirk. "Everyone, meet my brother, Ean." The room was silent for a moment , until Frisk, Asriel, and Paps bombarded me with questions.