Beautifully written! You can't help but get hooked right from the first chapter?Well done to the author on such an amazing novel❤️I'm really looking foward to reading more!!
I don't even want to waste time reviewing this novel. Alas I must do so for the betterment of my fellow readers. So here it goes. This novel is...toxic waste. Avoid at all costs.
I left a review on chapter 38 and thats my honest opinion. I lobe the ideas in this novel and hope it doesnt get dropped. Ill update my review if i see improvements.
Story was good. really good with world devolopment. But MC'S adopted mother opted to who*e(gangb*nged) herself out, for a reason. Author just put this scene casually. D*ckhead author should have put warning in synopsis if he was gonna put this type of with discription,since lot of people are sensitive with this type of scene.should not be suprising if author put hardcore Netor*re casually with discription.I hope this comment stays,not get deleted.
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Basically, another one of those simulation novels. Except that each life is identical to the previous one, making it more of a time loop. So that's somewhat original. Other than that, the story is just as lacking in plot, character development, and quality as every other simulation novel.
I liked the plot, world building but hated all the plotholes. Its not good to dumb down characters just to make dramatic. Commanders cant even use their assets right in an operations inspite having a lot of them. Redundancy and irrelevance are wasted on some of the chapters.
Shameless 5-star author review. This novel is a passion project of mine, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. The focus of the novel is action and adventure equally, with absolutely no other genre. The martial arts are centered around reality and science as much as possible, albeit greatly exagerated. The world is something I've invested a lot of time into building, as well as integrating into the plot in a logically justified manner.Please give it a read if you're interested.
Story has great promise, but is simply ruined by trash translation.translation after chapter 40 is simply unreadable , it is worse than MTL.this needs a rewrite, it’s very sad as the story has great promise.Great cheat(talent), 2 different power systems martial and cultivation although the names of the levels for the martial path are confusing and the entire power system isn’t structured properly or explained(as the MC himself is as clueless as the readers and he simply fumbles Away ) which is fun to see.Sadly whatever joy i could have in the novel is ruined by the TRASH TRANSLATION.if it gets a rewrite with an actual translation instead of whatever that is, then i will read again , until then i’m out.many great novels have been ruined by Trash Translation.
choose this story guys, I have followed this story through raws and it only gets betterthe Nationalism in this story is fair enough, plus kinda legitimate And final point, it's easily the best in this trial read ?hopefully, original authors get some inspiration from this story
I hope you can update more frequently!!!?
dont know if i can still get that free 5xp i hope i do here is a shameless review im here to read the novel so i hope it really is worth the 5 star im giving