So far it's a great story, will reserve the opinion till I read at least 100 chapter
I am a first review? Alright. So, while the plot is cliche, the Cinderella type plot, this novel is different because 1, The ex-gf have character development at the end 2. The family did not completely gone from the story aka they are not just there for the MC to get kicked out and therefore meet the ML3. There is a reason for the dad's homophobic although I will said he is still a jerk to meOverall I want to say good job to author, you clearly working hard on your story to make it unique and it show so here, take this 5* from me.
I love the idea the Author has chose to bring the story to life, the story flows so gently making it seamless and attractive to the reader. I don't know What it is but this story reminds me of 'The maze runner Sequels ' a beautiful story so far
If you like sports and an OP Mc with some romance tossed in give it a go. I read through everything on webnovel, then read through all of it in his patreon. Very good so far, can't wait for him to go pro.
I started reading it about a week ago and since then I have been hooked. I really enjoyed the story and the character development and story background were really well thought of. I cant wait to see more!
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Interesting story, with a mysterious and exciting power system. I think it has a ton of potential and it growing like this proves it. I will add it to my collection and hope to see the author mature as a writer! Again, just the dialogue needs a touch-up, but it is suitable for now. Another updated review will come your way once I get deeper into the story!
Okay, I am heavily confused, I think I might be going crazy? cause I read too chapter 20 and so far, the grammar is HORRID and the sentences are confusing as heck, the pacing is absolutely WACK and the world-building feels rushed, am I just going crazy? Why are there GOOD reviews? Is this actually a good story and I just need to go to an insane asylum?
fresh kind of probability cheat novel that I read. cant wait for the next chapter. but please make mc more brainy and wise. sometimes the way he act and think kinda annoying
Waiting for next part. Ricol, one of my favorite character. Bold and unique girl. Her character representation was so special. Add, more thrilling situations.
A great novel,starting is goodThe grammar is also good. it draws you In from the beginning.The world building, and settting is also goodCan’t wait for more chapters
( this is for new readers that wants to knew what they are approaching on?, also this is a redone, because my review got deleted, so here it's again ?)let's begin with the raosting.........hmmmm, why isn't there anything to raost about ?, all I could find is..--- firstly, the story's development, everything is in its place, the story isn't too fast nor too slow ??.--- secondly, the characters, every one of them has his own mystery, that you can find its solution with every new chapter ??.--- thirdly, the updating stability, it's just perfect, either daily or sometimes, day yes and day no but, that happens rarely ??.--- fourthly, the world background, for the first time it seems like your regular and boring wuxia novel but, wahahahah? let me say that you are for a very massive and thicc surprise, my fellow cultured civilian ?.--- finally, the MC ?, the MC is not your stupid, dense, heroic and Nobel MC? nor completely third rate vilian, no he knows what he is doing ( sometimes ?), slightly manipulative andknows when to say a joke to make it more funnier ? ( a level above Peter Parker ).aaaaand that's all I could find, and I'm sure that in the future it will be a piece of art ??, because this is the type of author that upgrades his story and opens new possibilities with every new chapter ??, and I will always be waiting for the updates of the story and its author ?. ___peace out___