Alright, a cool fantasy and mystery book :0 ngl loved it, I have read upto 15 chaps which is... all there is to read for now (upload more -_-) and honestly speaking, I liked the world building, characters are well written, everything is cool. I'm actually looking forward to see the 'mystery' thing in its full throttle and ofc, aidans future growth...May the author get some kind of celestial enlightenment and write more T-T
not bad, just needs more depth in each paragraph
This story is thrilling and original. The mystical ritual, unique powers, and vivid characters make for a truly enchanting and engaging read. I like the bond that Drake will make to his friends in this world. Keep it up author!
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so far its pretty interesting and it definitely has potential. don't drop it and keep cooking...............................................
one of my dream books that I always wanted to read. the plot seems interesting and is really detailed too, also main character is a type that I rarely see (a character that truly is a monster that follows their own instinct instead of staying with human morality but monster body) the only problem is while reading I saw some word errors like missing sentence or a wrong usage of words English is not my first language so I may be wrong on that.. overall it's really good story but not for soft stomach imo.
It’s not a bad start for the story but I feel like the author is moving through plot lines too fast. Slow the story down a little bit, flush characters out a little more. Read through first 30
okay so kindly support this novel ?? give some stone please ? because it's a great story ? thanks author good luck ?
Could be better. Author is a clear novice though the work has incredible potential. What is the reason for making the MC so stupid? Why? Why try to build up the world and then give us a massive, unnecessary info dump through a flashback?
We don't even know why humans can't see our world, why we can't interact with them.
It's a fantastic feeling, a moments of seeing the human world.