Nice novelThe concept the author created are very good and are well implemented in the world background.There are some errors in the plot and the characters lack ‘ true emotion’, Another thing regard the MC, he’s not an idiot, but not that smart either.Try to give him a faster mental growth, the mask should heavily influence his other self.Moreover, the stronger the smart. He doesn’t need to be a genius, but if he can multitask and fight so well then he should not need the system reminder or fall in his own forgetfulness.All in all, it’s a very nice Novell that, if correctly improved, can be brought to a higher level.In my opinion the author have hope of writing top novel in the future, so keep it up.
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I'm not really sure how to describe this novel. I stayed up until 5 am reading in one sitting after it was released. It's really one of the few novels that have been decent in the past few weeks. I could easily see myself reading this for some time. It reminds me of Charm of the soul pet or whatever the name is. MC doesn't mind killing at least a chapter 60 if needed. A couple of eyerolls, but I think that's a part of the genre once you've read enough. Overall due to the fact the recent novels have been honestly pretty bad... This is easily passed the time and was fun.
As close as possible to real slice of life without geg/meme moments, which are full of every second romcom/harem. Read definitelyWhy is there no illustration?!?!
this is pretty much food wars fanfic with locked chapter at that lol...
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I really liked the set up of the novel. Loved how you integrated your story with current Earth. Almode made me believe it:-)Great novel. Keep it up