I'm just here for the free fp from review
interesting story, as always the first chapter always had the cliche troupe, overall it's good
I know the story is still on going, so I am going to be patient, but so far, I love the story development.
author anyway u could update more chapters, I'm hooked and wanna read more.
this is a verry cool story but it needs more work ,why did you kill the mc just to bring him back, and why is their an oncalled for time skip?
nice for a beginner workI sense talent and potential from this although has a few gaps or issues here and there it doesn't spoil the reading experience
TRUTH AUTHOR why did you make the MC of this novel into D girl more better than genderbender female or male..That's why I hate EPIC OF CATERPILLAR that novel is so dumb with a gender bender. the novel is centered male hero but why is THE MC Kureina female always it dumb why not D GIRL . EPIC OF CATERPILLAR IS DUMB NOVEL Kureina is a total marriage sue who those not work hard for anything and she eats the human children because they are useless and for the skill points..kireina is so dumb she did not take science and technology skills SCIENCE IS GOD..why was your novel this FTNR
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