No cheats and it avoids a lot of the standard fair of overly stable foundations and joining sects. The one problem I'd say I have with the MC is that his character is kind of inconsistent. They talk about how mature he is for his age (due to this being his second life), but he doesn't exactly behave like someone who is almost 50 given both lifetimes. The clan leader is weird too. He is overprotective until the plot needs him to let the MC experience danger for reasons.There are a couple of weird translation choices as well. Using cauldron instead of furnace for refining artifacts for example and I think they used core foundation instead of the standard core formation. Overall it seems good outside of a few small translation and character quirks.
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This is a slice-of-life series focused on the MC being treated as a genius because he was a history buff or else lived through that time period before. The chapters only consist of flattery and shock regarding his comments, even though they aren't world-bending concepts and would've been possible to figure out enough without him.The MC is a mystery. Considering he's not personally familiar with anyone there, it looks like he traveled through time to the past or something. Since the series mentioned transmigration, I thought he went to a world in a book that described history of this other world, but one of the readers commented that "transmigration" is a mistranslation here. If he had memories of his future sent to the past, then he'd have more relationships with people. If this world is in a book, then he'd have his own agenda. Therefore, it looks like he's a history buff that just traveled back in time. There's no mention of a family, so I guess he wasn't reincarnated but just appeared out of nowhere.Although the MC cooks excellent food, the food is never described in detail. In fact, the setting of the world and description of the appearances of various things is never given at all. I initially thought it was set to a place like Europe in the middle ages since western names were used and the king was implied to only have one wife. Later, the king has a harem filled with many wives and concubines rather than mistresses.Aside from the setting and world background having no information, the characters themselves have no details either. A couple of people are described as old while the MC is described as young. There is no information about their races or how they dress. There isn't even any culture described at all.This series is incredibly passive. The system would have been its saving grace since it could've added a plot, but it still hasn't appeared forty chapters in.There is no plot, and there isn't any story development.No female characters appear in the first forty chapters with the exception of one of the king's wives and her maids. She appears once.With no story development, no plot, no character design, and no world background, there's nothing to expect from this series. Once you read the first chapter, you've basically read them all. They all flow in similar ways. I can't imagine what the author was thinking while writing this.
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This was actually really terrible.....Very disappointed, it could've been executed a lot better...................
“Do I really look like a guy with a plan? You know what I am? I’m a dog chasing cars. I wouldn’t know what to do with one if I caught it! You know, I just… *do* things.” – The Joker
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The story is awesome and I believe that the start is quite great. Keep on writing.. I will be waiting for new chapters... The imagery can be improved a bit tho...
This is actually good a combination of Jujutsu Kaisen and Author's own novel Lewd Apocalypse.While the MC is like a Yokai Hunter that hunt monster while retaining the power of Leo in lewd apocalypse.well in conclusion a good novel much recommended and hopes the Author will not drop it.
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you really need to be sent to jail. sometimes I wonder if mature people write stories in this web novel
First ever book written so let me know if it’ good or not probably won’t be the best thing in the entire world but hope it is good enough for all of u to enjoy!