why does the author tell me the definition of noodles at the end of the chapter??¿???????????????why???????????????????????????????????????
The nationalism is at an unbearably cringey level. The author's also already mentioned the "70 million army members and 10 million policemen" about 20 times, and the rest of the story is mediocre. I don't recommend people read it.
Really good story here! The world is well built and fleshed out. We continue to learn more about the characters and their background throughout the story. I also really love the style of the cultivation in this world that involves getting spirit equipment from beasts that you can store within yourself or inside a special storage device.Overall, this is a great read and well worth your time and spirit stones.
It is not great but still decent.Although it is a copy and paste novel, it is still better than any of the trial novel for this week.........
Okay, so my review is going to be spoiler heavy since there are few things I’d like clear up.1. “I Can Pick Up Powers From The Novels I Plagiarized”I have to honestly ask if we’re reading the same novel or not? All the stories he’s uploaded to the Evil God site are of his own creation. The first story about the golden finger was one he had written for an ero novel website, but because it was too graphic it was banned.The second story he uploaded, was one he created based on previous trends and to further his understanding of the site and the benefits it provides to its authors at each level. And the third story was once again a story he had written in the past during the time when the doctor sub-genre was trending.2. This novel had devolved into standard wish fulfillment.I can’t say that the person who made this comment is wrong, but if you were looking for anything more, then I have to say you’re in the wrong place — 99.9% of the novels on this website, be it the ones aimed at male or female readers, have some sort of wish fulfillment. They’re not the same kind of wish fulfillment, but they’re wish fulfillment nonetheless. And that’s okay. It’s why we read these novels in the first place; something to distract us from the slogs of our daily lives. The only real criticism for this novel I can think of is that the author over describes things. I have no idea how to close this review, but all I’ll say is that the concept is interesting, the writing is fairly decent, and the translation is surprisingly good — do give it a shot.
Hey author ch 22 is missing..????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Please Guys.Don't review this novel without reading at all. Saying something like, I love your novel blah blah. You have a good plot blah blah blah. And then posting your novel's link at the end of the review asking for a review as well. That's not a review at all. That's promoting.Please, guys, there is a forum to promote your novel. My novel is not the forum. I know I'm not a good author, but I just don't want to shoo away potential readers just because of your false and flowery review. Again, it's bad for my novel. And I don't think you would love something like that to happen to you, as well. I would immediately delete review like that so don't bother at all, you'll just waste your time. Thanks.
If you guys are looking for the netori, harem and r18 stuff might have to wait till this reach 100 chaps. mc character growth is just too strange for someone that was essentially an otaku. Too much self identity crisis and mc is still stuck in thinking in the norm when he is pretty much in a ntr game. The moral thing is just getting annoying at this point, contradicting thoughts that just annoys me or most readers.This is slow paced but don't central this around just the mc since it got boring reading it. Like adding about world building and how that world works from his research in his PC would probably help the mc make solid decisions.Cause from all the chapters so far, he gets pissed most of the time like as if a stick got stuck in his ass when given some info from his "friends". The big events so far that should have boost his character growth a lot, always have a reason to revert him back to normalcy thinking. It was already annoying at the beginning but now it's 45 chapters and little changed other than his physical attributes.Especially the revenge part where he thought this plan and how he was really gonna ruin this girl and even brags about how he will do it right from those shitty "revenge" stories he read in his previous world. Instead we get something that missed that claim..... it would be better if the author never added those sentences/reference cause it just made the mc even more unbearable.it may make sense realistic wise but God dam is it an annoying/bad story telling. Nothing is really note worthy that would hook the reader because of the "slow pace" and the 2 chapters or so of r18 text are probably what 90% of the reader cared about.The slow pace is just hard to pull off and may need to really amp his character. Cause at this point, you can just skip/skim chapters and probably won't miss anything important.
Author-san here, shamelessly giving my review!❤❤ This time, my system might have taken a turn for the worst?? But oh well, wouldn't its host be able to handle it?Hope you all love it! Enjoy!??
I would love to get into this right away but thise strange bot accounts with the email make this more intimidating than it really should be....
I love the novel and how the story is going. Were by everyone is trying to survive after the apocalypse. Still waiting what will happen at the end if the apocalypse will end or if they will find the cure of the virus, thank you author keep it up.
66 chapters in and i am already tapping out. i cant trust these reviews. this book is dry and unappetizing ? i give up. i need some recommendations. ✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?