HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!!d writing quality is gud & story development is well planned! I thirst for more each time I finish one....the author did a good job at describing each scenarios, specially the fighting scenes. I luv this! keep writing please.
This is genuinely quite good, the world is not super developed, but almost all of the characters have something interesting about them, this is not the kind of novel where you wont remember who a character is, no, you know exactly what type of person everyone is, their capabilities, their personality.the main character is not a core focus, a lot of events happen to other people, the main character is just there to be the game designer, and while plenty of time is dedicated to the office and dealing with employees, a large amount of the novel also cover the gameplay and interesting stories of the players, there is the hacker who went to jail but now works for the main character business company, or the rich young master who feels burdened by his responsibilities and used gaming as a way to relax, but through a random chance meeting with someone in an internet cafe, he gained a good friend who is also talented at gaming and the two work together to make a group.there is plenty of potential which can be brought out, as long as this does not fall the classic pitfalls of china #1 everyone else bad and arrogant young masters/shallow villains.
someone knows the mtl name of this novel?...........................................................................................
i really like this novel or whatever it is, but i cannot give the full 5 stars without further chapters, which I believe will be interesting.
overall it seems like a promising novel to read. the author needs to get a editor or write this in grammarly or something cause the grammar gives me a stroke.
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I wanted to ask does the main character have a last name because I don’t think I’ve seen any Remnant of it? but overall I honestly love
story is great but you should use commas and punctuation marks brackets etc and make it more Readable overall it is nice I will support you with power stones so keep it up bro
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So I think this is my best work in terms of grammar as I've already written two other books and learned from them.
The beginning is a bit enraging so it might not be for some people.
The MC isn't meant to be an all-powerful being, but a spider that pulls strings from behind to get what he wants (Though he still fights a lot).
Also, I already said this in the first chapter, but this story does use historical events but is not completely historically accurate.
These historical events do come later in the novel though, so don't expect them too early.
Uhhhhhh... I think that's it. Anyway, please enjoy my novel!
reading until the wee hours of the night can't not recommend
That works remind me of some kind of film or a movie with a well-described plot and ideas. The characters, the words chosen for the story and the knowledge of the author in this sphere is amazing. I highly recommend the author to keep going and maybe on day we'll have a new sci-fi movie!!