A história é ótima muito envolvente, mas não tem nem uma dessas merda q a webnovel gosta como enredos muito clichê ou algum erro muito feio o rpteiro então não vai ser escolhida, tenho 90% de certeza, mas se fosse uma história ruim iria ser escolhida pq esse site é muito mal gerenciado, e se algum souber outros site por favor me fala já cansei desse.
The synopsis is interesting...The story fascinated me from the beginning...it was intense, mysterious, and humorous... The character Dan is fantastic...Excellent work, Author!
I have read a few chapters and what can I say. This story it probably one of the best out of here, even though I read only one.This story gave me some Grand Theft Auto, Mafia, Saints Row and God-Father vibes. Can't wait for your next work, Author!
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Give it a try, I enjoyed reading it.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I was sure the author had 500 chapters on gravity a couple weeks ago as it transitioned to here. Now have to wait another few months for it to catch up to current. I keep getting more and more disappointed with webnovel and its bs. Whether it's stealing translations done by others when they get shutdown and then profiting to charging insane amounts for novel translations that can be dropped at any point with no guarantees. Translators went from under payed to over payed. These authors wouldn't have the visibility they currently have if it wasn't for the communities in the first place, and now they are too greedy.
I enjoyed this book. I think it has much potential. Those ****ting on this clearly have no patience to read further, so their loss. ??????????????
Translation Quality 1 .Am currently at ch 220.The story is good, but the translation is hard to understand when there are some lines missing in some chaps and all the pronouns are replaced as 'it'. Till chap 40 is good. After that, the English and translation are never even considered properly.
what's up with you people rating it 5 stars when you don't even explain the reason why you like it? For me it was a total disappointment, it was okay at first but suddenly things just get distorted, mixed up and messy. btw i hate the way the author keeps pinpointing the carrot, I mean things are already getting messy and yet he's still forcing the carrot line to be inserted.
Such an interesting story! The synopsis wasnt too detailed but surely intriguing. The idea of the story itself was lovely. Well done author will surely recommend this story to others
I have read to around 600 chapters. I can say for sure that I HATE the MC. He is the most childish, and ignorant MC, by a massive size, I have read. He constantly thinks he isn’t being smart while only being saved by the plot. The thing hate the most is that he talks about wanting to be a man and strong to protect his friends Andy family, but he goes into stupid actions. For example, when he finally finds his sister he, by ch 550-600, he finds that her memories have been sealed. Now, if it’s me and my sister has her memories sealed I would get her the **** out and find out why. What does he do, he decides to trust her because it’s his sister. Really, are you f#$&ing out of your mind. The final straw for me was how everything turn out find because of plot shield. Nobody suffered due to her plan being messed up, or nobody important is missing since you know they are the MC’s people.Overall, this is a cliche over cliche story with little sprinkles of plot shield, ok massive sprinkles. Don’t waste your time on this one.