This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author
Everything is good so far, I say so far since there wasn’t enough chaps to actually judge it good. I just wanna give ideas, don’t make the mother be a very easy capture, he is still her son, she took care of him since he was a child so there is bound to be complications when he abruptly changes his view on her, just take it slow. The big sister, perfect, couldn’t have done that better, lil sis, perfect, reminds me of ‘Little rascal doesn’t want to meet a bad end’. Make him do exercise early on, but not to the level where after a year timeskip, he can destroy mountains, that’s stupid, just enough to get him going.Don’t make this guy rely on his system all the time, since you wrote that he is a straight A student then he should be pretty smart, and people who are good at chess are very good at tactics and split second decision making so you can make use of that.When he starts his first se.x scene, take advantage of the fact that he has watch a lot of **** and hentai that he knows how to pleasure women even though he is a virgin, I already tried that, and I was glad I spent a couple of hours watching po.rn and hen.tai.Don’t let him be a pushover, It’s kinda weird being a harem protagonist while you’re being dominated in bed.100 chaps is too long for a se.x scene, just do timeskip dude.
"This Master one more bottle."
I shocked in silent.
"Yes, who the heaven smart people who want to choose their leaders based on the words they just hear from other people and quickly they say it's the truth."
She suddenly hugged me, keeping her face on my chest.
Issei didn´t answer. A part of him wanted to. But as soon as he thought back about it, he suddenly felt a pain in his chest, exactly at the place where her light-spear had pierced him.
Judging by the hole in the satellite picture
That's the way I like it and I never get bored
In the shape of an "L" on her forehead
Around the evening Lia and her father reached to one small inn.
You'll never know if you don't go