Based on what I've been reading, the book is interesting. Though there doesn't seem to be any character development so far, I like Jake as a character. And I still want to know who killed his mum. Good work so far. ?
I like the premi of the novel and have enjoyed it please don’t drop.
This book is a hidden gem. The plot, pacing, characters are all rich. Their desires are showcased with all the emotions from the good and bad. This novel is very well written. I need more!
I must say this was quite an entertaining read. The story does an amazing job of building up relationships with realistic reasonings behind character actions. The world-building seems to be developing at a steady pace and would make a great setting. Alas, there has not been any update in 2 years and the author has not posted since on any of their novels.If this novel ever begins again I think it has the makings to be one of the best. If you read this author, please, please, continue the novel. It was so good.
I'm writing this review as of chapter 70. I think this series has a lot of potential! But it could use some work to realize it. I know it currently has over 800 chapters at the time of this writing so maybe these issues are addressed by now but I'm just giving my thoughts about what I've read so far. I think this story takes a very different approach to stories that involve the main character having a system in a world where everyone has one. Systems are generally made to make the growth of the characters easier and or faster than it would be without one. After all, why spend years working out and training relentlessly to become strong when you can just level up and do quests? But with this work, the bad guys are manipulating the game/system to try and make it so the main character and the rest of humanity don't get strong. So the main character has to be smart enough to find ways to make the system work for him instead of against him. All while screwing over the bad guys that are trying to screw him over. It helps the story feel unique. I also like that there doesn't seem to be much Deus Ex Machina going on. Every challenge the MC wins against is because of his strategies and not because he pulled some power out of nowhere. But there are problems. One is that are are fairly frequent grammatical and spelling errors. Some are more noticeable than others. The second problem is that the story doesn't seem to know if it wants to be a harem or not. It also seems like there's a bit too much info given at once to keep track of sometimes. It just feels like the story's scope is already way too big for where it currently is. But overall I think this is a pretty good work that deserves a good look.
The story is good, and the mc is not completely stupid like in other novels. The world is that of spirits and ghosts, the mc uses his abilities to hunt down these ghosts and gains the energy need to use his system. Honestly, probably the best of this week's trial reads but not my cup of tea.
Mc starts off in real estate which is what I liked, But then changes into an action movie with bed guys coming out the wood work on top of that the Mc has daddy issues and is blinded by the need to be acknowledged also geography is off because mexico and Switzerland have a international train together???
good start, but after 50 chapters it starts to show a clear decline.For example, turning a schoolmate into a chess piece is just a forced armor plot.I read this novel because of the same author from the novel "Spare Me, Great Lord!"but the quality of this novel is not satisfactory, I am very disappointed.
To say the truth i was thinking that novel is like the other ones with villains, but no, and that really surprised me, the history is simple but it's good.Ps: I know it's a cliche, but i want him with Alina too.
saw you were playing with the plot in the first few chapters. But I really love how the story progressed into something serious and complex. Solid world building, nice pacing and good character development. You really have something good going on here. With some editors and a good publisher, you might get a franchise or best seller. Probably a movie.
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I'd have given a 5 star review but the author has not updated for over 2 months and I really want some more ????????????????