Harem when?
I already have both of them in my library
**No spoilers**
Important part first, if you can get passed the rough outline of the ending it really is a good book and is still worth a read.
Love the story and the concept, could tell he really had a good idea of where he wanted to go with it and enjoyed writing it. My only gripe is the ending, you can tell that he ran out of juice and it didnt seem like he was enjoying the process anymore. I really hope he comes back and rewites the ending at some point. The beauty of a web novel is it can awlays be changed and updated.
The ending clearly shows how he wanted it to end it, and it has a solid structure. But it does feel like it was rushed a bit. That being said it really just needs a polish. I plan on rereading it again, and I really do hope that someday he revisits this book to give it the ending it deserves.
welp this is awkward i just saw the reply now, Not being sexist cus i actually like some female mc (nanomancer reborn, his genius wife is a superstar, reborn as a dragon girl, epic of the caterpillar and etc) but this story would fit better if it was a male mc for me. Idk just me
Ok with all these handsome men... does this become a reverse harem type of novel...
He really does p*ss me off a sometimes while reading tbh ?
Too bad but not much can be done.
Warning : Around ch. 1600 the first paragraph is missing from these uploads, for like a hundred chaps ( or more? ) and cg 1654-1657 are allll messed up, out of order and duplicated.
The first chapter will hook you so bad. The amount of content is also just so much. I like it so far
Dear readers!
Welcome to the journey of Atlas as he strives to become the Mightiest Lord across all realms, haha! [img=nervous]
I wanted to take a moment to share a few thoughts with you about this story.
While you might have read stories with similar themes before, I’m excited to bring my own unique spin to it. You can look forward to a blend of slice-of-life moments, friendship, a bit of comedy, romance, action, and, naturally, some intense kingdom-building as the story progresses. [img=proud]
Now, some of you might feel that the pacing is a bit slow—but trust me, this isn’t slow. Just don’t expect our main character to be commanding an army of 1,000 by Chapter 30. That’s not how this story rolls. [img=thinking]
One thing I want to highlight is that I’m crafting this story in my own style, where side characters aren’t just flat NPCs. They have depth, emotions, and meaningful interactions with the MC. [img=Loving it]
On the technical side, I’m making every effort to stay consistent. I’ve got a detailed set of notes in my Google Sheets, so rest assured—there won’t be random plot holes or lazy world-building here. [img=strong]
If there’s anything you’d like to ask or share, feel free to leave your thoughts in the comments! Your feedback means the world to me. [img=recommend]
Good premise for a story. OP does his homework, this much is obvious.
That being said, this story is in need of context. I feel like I get 60% of the story... I want the other 40% that is trapped in OPs head.
I enjoy this novel very much, eagerly awaiting the next chapter each day. So far, it's a fun little novel of a company drone turning into a good of a virtual tribe. However, it doesn't take long before the citruspers an real world start interacting.
So far, the development of the tribe is still premature as the just discovered bronze, so let's see what more setback "God" and his pixel tribe have to overcome.
I set the character design and world background conservative, as both are still a work in progress
Interesting enough, as long as the author doesn’t make the mc stray from the path of a villain 10/10 would recommend