The writing of this book is really good. I guarantee it's a really great book that everyone would love.
Hey author i really really liked your work and I'm not kidding it's my one of the best novel and I really liked it's just that could you please read it ?Is our MC's black heavenly fate value of only show ?? the way I see it's only decoration and nothing more for me it looks like you nerfed him i haven't seen any use of that it can't even help him fight against protagonists even a little bit let any luck encounter and the protagonists who came or will be coming if their heavenly fate value decreases then heavenly fate's tactics should also decrease and give some leeway to our character right? why why why you are nerfing him so much, I'm not complaining about you should directly make him op I'm just saying as heavenly fate value decreases of protagonist then make it somewhat easy for character and the second way you nerfed him in is Villain Points bruh you always give him pitiful villain points like in system mall the prices are skyhigh for anything he wants ??
it's good kind of unique this kind of story is hard to find as a zombie fan I give 99 china points The only problem is updating speed
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Started reading it a few days ago and I found it to be a real interesting read. So much thought process has been put in to create the world. The way MC has been portrayed makes you feel sorry for him at times but the way he rises to the occasion fill the heart with pride. Keep writing author.
this was so hard to read for some reason and the way you describe things is appalling. could not get past the free chapt sadly not worth it for me.
Great novel more chapter plz ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Decent read and has potential to have lots of chapters
This story is getting more and more interesting after the introduction of a really mysterious character. Only 6 Chapters out and I have already become a fan of it. I have seen many movies and shows on bullying and I thought that this story must be about bullying as well, however when I read that the story is inspired from the author's real life, I knew I had to read it and boy I am so glad I did.It has a very likeable cast of characters with my favourite character being Vansh and Reyansh is relatable to an extent. The inner monologues add so much depth. The last three chapters have been 10/10 in my opinion. I just wished the author wrote at least one chapter per day because then it might have had been picked up by the Webnovel and the author would have started to earn. I understand that the author is a teenager though and that he has a lot of things to do plus writing a story like this might require a lot of effort.I wish all the best to the author. I hope he becomes successful!
Is the guy behind the tree the same one she saw in bus stop. The how did he vanish all of a sudden and where did he go? The driver was sure that he hit someone but theres no one there
the story is good and the world-building, the only bad thing is, of course, how short is..............................................................