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bruh, this novel is quite good but it's too g*dd*mn annoying. why the f*ck is there always endless troubles without any rest? he just solve something and another on pops up right after that. what the heck was that? didn't this author know how to pace his novel and give some time for MC and disciples some rest? it's fine if he's already strong enough to withstand it and counterattack but he's just at first stage of cultivation and he's already facing 3rd stage cultivators left and right? just what the heck is wrong with that sh*t? it's so g*dd*mn annoying that we can't even see them enjoy the well deserved rewards after solving some trouble because another one will come out right after that. d*mn, so infuriating.
The ranking is b*llsh*t... believe me this is really good novel, if you've read warlock of the magus world then it's kinda similar atleast in terms of world building... But the development is totally different and amazing... imo it deserves to be in top 50 at the very least...
I dont know but the thing with age in another arc, QianQian and Jinchen, that FL is so overreacting. Their age gap is just 4 years, yet she looks disgusted that their gap is like that. What's wrong with woman older than the man?
Missing the last 20 chapters. There should be a total of 943 chapters, not 923.
Few chapters missing pls update
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It's a good story especially the power system, although I wish that that we will see more concept, like the concept of Growth or the concept of heat or the concept of distance or even the concept Evolution or Mutation. Still great story good job, I have already read more than 700 chapters.
Had to make an account just to leave a review on this novel with how quick it's updating.
a big lack of coherence, I would have believed the story of a 15/18 year old kid but the kid is 5 years old it is unthinkable that the matech would happen like this it was a league match ^^ the author would have skipped it childhood or change the age of the child.
Have read till chapter 14, found no grammatical errors, story seems going in the right direction, the pacing is just right and honestly I can't point out any flaw in this story till chapter 14. I hope you maintain this quality and publish more chapters, I need more of them.
Interesting story with a kinda interesting setting. Hope this one doesn't also get abandoned due to the harassment and bullying by the pathetic self-inserting insecure cucks.Only advice to the author is to write what he wants to because you are not going to satisfy everyone, so might as well stay true to yourself. GLHF.