I would have rated it more had you only joined the Supreme Side, not Strongest. Strongest is overrated bruh haha! Joking! Looks good, good luck in your endeavor and may lots of readers check it out!
The heart shift's is the story connected to the book, You broke Me First (Omegaverse). If the readers is looking for the other details mentioned in this book, please read You Broke Me First (Omegaverse)
Is it weird that I'm in love with my own book? Dang, I enjoy reading it over and over again even more than I enjoyed writing it. Coming from the author, I can tell you, this is not just your average office romance...it's way more ;-)
it's decent, not really bad or good kinda in the middle. This might get good, tho.
THIS NOVEL HAS POTENTIAL! Though I might be unforgivable frank, it is a bit boring and draggy. Don't let this review put you down DON'T ERASE IT! put something interesting that happened, put more character in your MC! Spice things up!
ótimo livro nao tive a oportunidade de ler ele com todo...
Nice workWriting quality needs sone work but everything other things has great potential
Am interested where this leads big supporter here hope you update more frequently cause I can’t get enough It turned a sad direction at chapter 78 or 79 see everything just go completely depressing but I wanna see how you write this best of luck in you achieving your goals??
Your writting is superb. More so better than mine. I like how one could clearly build the images. You really have your way with words.Please continue with your work without holding back.
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Pretty good writing, the character is a bit flat at the moment and the story development is good. I think the beginining was a bit drawn out, but you get the reward pretty soon.I guess its a pacing issue? But it seems to stop being an issue later on. I'll see
Uhm, so I'll be shameless enough to put out 5 stars for my book ?. Pls do tell in the comment section if there's any grammatical errors for me to fix up.Enjoy!