So when is his biochemical beast going to hatch? It's been a while since he got it
The romance in this is definitely written by a virgin, difficult to read these novels when their author's idea of relationships and romance is seemingly revealed to them in a dream or from their smut novels they read.
loli read this already. and google translate much more readable than this.
AUTHORRRR PLEASE UPDATEEE...*cries* *sorrows*
This is a sci-fi/action series where characters have the opportunity to evolve using special serums and mutate with traits of other animal creatures for combat. Society is largely ruled by gangs, and not just anyone can live just anywhere.
The main character himself is a gangster, but this isn’t explored fully. Although he has a family, there has been little world building or time spent with his family members or at his home, so he comes across as a rather shallow character. The other characters suffer from lack of depth as well, and they are quite forgettable. My Vampire System has a similar problem with character depth and making readers feel emotionally attached to and sympathetic toward the characters of the series, but it’s even worse here.
The character designs are overall quite weak and forgettable.
The story development largely makes sense so far, although not too much has happened yet. Some of the characters don’t make the most logical choices, especially the main character, but neither do real people. Even when there are some clearly important and critical things for the main character to explore, such as experimenting with his physique or testing out his abilities, he ignores these things altogether. He doesn’t make the wisest choices, and some of the planning in the plot is odd but may make sense later on.
The world background is in desperate need of being filled up and shown, not told. Although some details have been explained to the readers, little has been shown to them to let them experience this world through the senses of the main character or other characters. This series could improve in quality dramatically by fleshing out the world and characters themselves.
Although this is a series about werewolves, it’s clear by this point that the author didn’t do any research on wolves themselves due to obvious errors in describing wolves’ behaviors. If you’re here because you like wolves, then you will be disappointed. If you are here for werewolves and not the animal they’re based on, then you may still enjoy the series. If you are here for wolves and want to learn more about wolves by reading this series, then you should make a hasty retreat.
Overall, some people may still like this series, but I don’t like it’s worth spending spirit stones or fast passes on with its current level of writing. That said, the writer could dramatically improve the quality of his series by trying to build the world and characters more.
Espero que no sea elegida.....................................................................................................................................................................................................
its worthy!!! this book is totally blowing me. and make me so excited to read and read again. im so glad i've read this book and now im learn something about this book
it is a great book all around .
Its hard to write this given I’ve been here since chapter 20, but I’m done. I’m not going to spoil the plot, but I am going to list the major problems. 1. Over the course of the novel the ‘system’ becomes an afterthought. It’s a common problem amongst novel’s that use a system with balance, and large bricks of text becoming harder to manage. It ends up getting updated once every hundred chapters. 2. Eiro becomes more, and more 1 dimensional as the story progresses. Without giving specifics Eiro loses his initial wrathful charm as it gets replaced with a more karen like anger. 3. Dice goes for way too much consistently causing random important plots to be dropped, and filler added. At chapter 600 3 giant plots have been seemingly forgotten that immediately come to mind. This compounds with the massive roster that leaves many characters thin. This all slowly ate at me for the last hundred chapters, and I’m dropping it now. Goodluck, hopefully Dice fixes this stuff so you can enjoy his work more than me.
good story for some, but a big no for me,there is no logic, a boy asleep for 9 years knows a lot of information, dad don't question his abilities, personally I don't recommend this book, when I read the synopsis it give me a high hopes for a good novel, pure torture reading 26 chapters.
you know i don't why the plot feels forced. all of a sudden, the dean wants to mess up mc. considering there are more harm than good. imagine if mc joins the dark organization, upon knowing who is part of who, he will have to take revenge on the dean by the time he is strong. second thing, why of a sudden the deans wants to mess up with mc? hay 3rd, chapter 23 and it appears that there is a voucher to unlock. some novels have locked the novel for voucher around chapter 60 as it is trial read, while yours although it appears that the wording are at the bare minimum, wants it around chapter 23.
nice book :)minimum characters arghhhh