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You know when you have found an excellent novel when you just start reading and you still want more every novel this author has brought out is like that from character development to world development overall this author is just awesome
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irrespective of the personality or genre of a book it's an honour to be able to review a work cos it isn't easy to dab your thoughts into writing, more grease to your elbow dear author.
The story is great but same times convoluted more stability on the development of relation with the MC and back ground stories of the ladies would enrich the plot and open more possibilities development of the storyline and overall fell of the book
I've read quite a lot of original novel either on Webnovel or royalroadl, and this one really got good prospect.Without much spoiler we can see there is a feeble and quite stupid MC at first with a mentality that in quite sure a lot of readers won't like, but because of his meeting with that legend and the adventures that follow, the MC experience a growth in a lot of lacking area and become in the end a MC that I'm sure every reader like to follow. I've read till the latest chapter (111 at review time) and I'm quite surprised at how well done the characters design is, it is extremely rare in original novels to see a flawless design like that ?.My only regret is that the world background is too complex to understand right now, I guess the more the story unveil the more we will understand about it, but for the details given until now, I must say I'm totally lost ?. But it doesn't matter as all the good points totally outweigh this one.Anyway, author really talented ? I sincerely hope to see more from him ?.
I have read till 45th chapter and have to say the grammar in this novel isn't preferable. I know this novel is made after the novel "I became a second generation villain"(which is a great novel 100% recommended).But the author of this novel has poorly displayed the plot. there are many plotholes but that can be ignored if you have patience. And the most disappointing thing is the "villain" is turning more into a protagonist.I don't know after chapter 45 but it has been mostly disappointing to me.Certain acts dosent suit a VILLAIN.Also the dialogues of supporting characters are too trash.I won't say anything anymore.But i bet this wouldn't quench your thirst for VILLAINS.
Overrated novel. The logic is so chaotic and the mc does the opposite of what he saying most of the time. I never had any expectations to begin with chinese novels like this so I'm not disappointed. All I wanted to say is this novel is a waste of time don't bother reading it.
Very mediocre, nothing special here. If you've read this type of story before nothing will surprise you here. Nothing unexpected or new to see in the entire 40 chapters available.
If you like novel about newborn baby having harem with 16+ girls and every character acting like idiots instead acting like proper adults. This novel will be for you.
Everyday I lose more and more faith in Webnovel and it’s readers. Chapter 1 had me going to check the blurb since I only checked it out because it was recommended and didn’t read it. Why is this community so obsessed with I N cest? How can authors even stomach writing the scenes? Do they fantasize about their own mothers and sisters? ???. I like the h***m genre, but with the increasing amount of I n cest in h***m novels, I may have to go with single fl from now on bc apparently it’s too difficult to keep a family wholesome ?. Good luck on your future writing endeavors ✌?