this is a very lovely story and I enjoyed it
u write good ...
can we get some updates please dear author
It's cute and all, but as many reviews have pointed out, there are too many plot holes that don’t make sense.
A flash marriage with someone you just met? Okay, I can buy that plot because it’s common in a lot of Chinese webnovels.
But a deeply in love, devoted, borderline obsessed guy after they’ve only met a couple of times with minimal interaction? Yeah, right.
It’s mentioned that they met once before the time the main character remembers, but so what? Their interactions were still so minimal. It would have made more sense if he was just attracted to her or obsessed with her appearance, but no, he had to say "I love you" a few days after their marriage, when they had only met 2-3 times before getting married.
Psh. So unrealistic and ridiculous. I doubt the author has any real romantic experience.
I gave this book 2 stars because it is poorly written. While the grammar is acceptable, the characters lack depth, as others have mentioned. The actions and motivations of the characters seem juvenile and two-dimensional, almost as if written by a child. Honestly, giving it 2 stars feels generous.
The plot follows the typical narrative of a girl villainess trying to establish herself while avoiding the common "death route." However, there's nothing unique or compelling that sets this story apart from others in the genre. In fact, I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone looking for a story about a villainess.
It lacks originality and reads like something an 8-year-old might write. There are far better villainess novels available that are truly worth your time. , I do not recommend this novel.
In summary, the story has promising elements, particularly with the intense enemies-to-lovers dynamic between the main characters, Meng Jinhuai and Duan Hengye, given their complex history as spies, political adversaries, and having a romantic connection. However, the author fails to fully explore this fascinating aspect, instead focusing on research and world-building, resulting in slow character development and underwhelming romance. The potential for deep emotional growth, tension, and vulnerability is squandered, leaving the reader feeling unsatisfied with the superficial portrayal of their relationship. Despite appreciating the initial concept, the lack of depth and focus on the relationship dynamics earns the book only a moderate rating from me.
I really like this showbiz novel, it really shows off the tear jerking and impressive performance of concepts on stage. Emotional performances. Not just performances, relationships between trainees being mended through words of life that made it seem like alongside we're with in on the journey with mc through harsh times as a trainee till debut then a full fledged idol yet still came with troubles to pull through. Family. Became the cause and driven force with friends , fleshed out characters that are much given thought and backstory to which makes it us look into another perspective wether a trainee or fan and even family. I like it.
Hey, administrator
Can you do something about the system box/dialogue in this novel ?
It's really annoying to read at this point
Thanks
Holy Roman empire isn't holy nor Roman it is German.
And the novel is about a German kingdom...
尽管篇幅很短，但读起来挺吸引人的。不过我对结局有点小失望，因为我总是期待更多（笑）。文中的alpha角色非常投入且极其温柔。我记得有一句关于他的第一条和第二条原则的台词：“1. 妻子永远是对的。2. 如果他错了，那就记住第一条原则。”这句话真是可爱极了，让人忍不住流泪。（微笑）如果你想一口气读完的故事，这绝对值得一试。
Lol, I honestly thought that the comments were exaggerated but NOPE!
I binged all the way to chapter 554 and Jesus! I've never seen an arc so long. Usual long arcs, takes breaks to have some slice of life stuff or have a different POV of other characters which makes the arc 'seem' long. This however, EVERYTHING is with the MC going through the story, it's like there's the main arc(ruin exploration) with mini arcs inbetween lasting 20-30 chapters. Hold up, in fact, the main arc right now is the 'academy arc', which has the 'ruin exploration arc' then those 'mini arcs', Jesus!
I recommend starting this when it reaches 1k+ chapters. It's not a bad read, it's a system novel so you should pretty much expect OP MC, downside is the PACING‼
That is exactly the same thing that happened to me as well like word for word haha. That feeling of running out of stuff and having to wait is brutal.