Luther and Marcie was kind of naive. What do you mean by "Do you know how many people died in the war?" Don't be so triggered. It's been tough but don't blame someone for the deaths on your world. The truth hurts and accept that you're just a f*cling weakling that wasn't that strong yet. Your 'righteous' tone made me want to vomit.
First time reading this and I just got to chap 69 but my mind is like "HOW IN THE EFF AM I JUST READING THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!". It's actually really good if you don't mind him being against the Catholic church
Some chinese son of a b*tch problems
Dude everything you've done so far and now you're worried about innocents? I don't understand what the authors trying to do here. Is he evil or is he not. Stop trying to make him I to a nice evil person.
Yeah I like to say that I understand what's going on but truly ever since he left the fake dead world I haven't really been able to understand how the world's work anymore like I still enjoy the story but it's hard to understand
Why do people have to write multiple POV stories? If you have multiple POV's then do it in 3rd person.
Lots cringe moments ruins the novel for me
The protagonist spends most of the chapters pretending to be cool but comes of like an edgelord
His companion praises him for doing ordinary and unremarkable things (I cringed every time)
However the writing is decent except for poor sentence structure (too much rambling and repetition)
Worldbuilding is shallow... what with the info dumps in a constant attempt to compensate
Plot is there and it is consistent for the most part but relies on the idiot ball tactic at times
Worst is the tone of the novel... almost all characters showcase snark and tantrums, dialogues sound immature and the tension is all but none existent... so it is no word i feel cringe almost every chapter
Overall well written but misguided... If only there wasn't such a blatant attempt at making everything look cool because often the result is the opposite
Ah, so far, the book is alright; the writing is fine, the story is developing, but slowly, the character designs are alright, and the main character is just a normal smart boy with potential (who knows, maybe he'll get better later). It is advised for readers with a lot of patience, but even though it seems unexceptional, this book has a lot of potential if there is character development.
Haven't read it yet but I will now, I just want to say this here.... MC's background is similar to mine except the last 2...... 1. I don't live in an apartment, but my dad's house (May he rest in peace) And 2. I haven't had a girlfriend since I was 24 (I'm going 34)
It's very decent, The amount of work done, The Effort and the Context of this Book, It is highly recommended to be read, It creates a whole new world of our planet.
Very good novel
Sam character is amazing
The best story I have ever read
While I am reading story I couldn't remember any other work
All the best author
Trash.Don't even waste your time reading this.............................................................................................