I really enjoy this book. its has an amazing story and great plot. also not to cliche( yet to be sure about that). I would have love to read more before dropping this review. thou have got an issue with the update, you can't expect to make a book premium at chapter( which mostly discourage new readers) and fix the update of chapters to once per day. that's really poor for a new book. even the top books like my vampire system update at least 3 chapters per day. I think the author or translator to work more on releasing more chapters per day to be able to retain readers cause this book has a lot of potential. Hope my advise is taken seriously cause am getting bored with a single chapter per day and am about to delete it from my library if there is no changes.
I just giving five star for MC laziness . . It's looks interesting but it's pick or not, that's the big problem.... Anyways, just make it bit comedy!! I love mostly because life very dull .. ?
i thaught i would enjoy this book due to how mc powers up being similar to a phew books i rather enjoy and also the added extra of maids caught my intrest however i have to say that the mindset of the mc is so bad a complete and uter beta which i do not enjoy reading. i could of potentially accepted this fact and continued reading the story for the 20 chapters however the inconsistencys with the mcs attributes just pushed me over the edge and as such i shall not read any further to save my sanity. however i can see that this will potenially be a good book however it is not for me.
I'm really enjoying the story so far. the world building feels organic and is enjoyable to learn. I totally recommend reading it. Overall a nice easy read.
I read until chapter 300 almost, 295, only reason I even did so was the whole book was free thanks to the webnovel deal they have where certain books are unlocked completely for a limited time.The plot was inconsistent and chaotic and full of filler, half the time I couldn't make heads or tails of what was happening or why it was happening, the author has a severe randomness problem, this also ties into the plot, for the times I can actually comprehend with is going on overall and their is a point to the madness with an over arching story in general for each arch its fleshed out poorly, alot of the time the pacing sucks and I just find myself wanting to get it over with, the jokes are unfunny and only once in the entire 300 chapters where they finally faced off against the wolf clan or whatever and the action somehow finally psyched me up a Lil bit.Overall while the story isn't bad, it has a randomness and filler problem that often makes me question if it weren't free could I justify spending my coins on it, at least for me o wouldn't be able to justify to myself unlocking this rather than something else, the kaijus characters I didn't really find cool, the jokes unfunny, the whole acting like your stronger than you really are trope was over used and alot of the time I just wanted the MC and his allies to bash the enemies skull in already in boredom and frustration, and filler and chaotic writing plagued many chapters, do I need to know every single thought of every character involved in this one scene happing at one point of the story? He'll no! 2.2 stars is my rating, go spend coins on some other summoner MC book.
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This review follows Webnovel's provided rating criteria, and each category will be given a short explanation.Firstly, writing quality is three stars. In the initial chapters, there are glaring spacing errors that took me right out of my reading flow. This issue seems to be largely gone by chapter 6, but I'd recommend polishing those initial chapters. Remember, first impressions matter!Next, story development is five stars. The pacing is great, and it makes me want to read more.Character design is. . . One star. The characters have names, but I can't recall any basic features aside from clothes.Lastly, world background is five stars. It's a unique setting that I'd say is extremely memorable.
I hope I'm not annoying you with my questions.Is everything fine with you author?As one of your loyal fans I really admire the work done in this novel so I'm always longing for new chapters as many others of your fans.When can we expect the return of the story?Hope you do fine :) .Sorry if I'm annoying you.PS: (No ill intentions in my messages and I'm sorry for my bad English)
this book is amazing. it has a great start that draws you in and the author tells the story from the best perspective. I can not wait to see what happens next good job author keep it up.
This is a hidden gem, wow.. just wow, although there are shortcomings, there is a big lack of kingdom building novels in the english market atm in terms of webnovels that are good enough in my critical view to actually achieve great success, this novel is definitely one of those with great potential up till chapter 60, although it is somewhat of a half kingdom building novel it is still enjoyable to read for me and the translation quality is good enough for me I wont gain a migraine reading broken chinglish writing, over all something worthy enough to enter the two dozen or so kb novels I can actually read without immense frustration and language barriers...
This novel really helps me get my daily review in. This is the 5th time the translator has mass deleted negative reviews. It’s shameful, disgusting, immature, and manipulative.