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this is something that i think of as neat.
so far I have read 23 chapter and all I understand from them isthis world rule by a witches and witches can't use there own mana to cast magic they need mana from men not all the men have mana though.if men use there own mana to cast magic and if they successfully able to cast magic considered as a magi but also criminal if witches find out there's a men who can use is own mana to cast magic they are killed by witches.
Hey! The book is amazing, I just noticed a small grammar error in chapter one (I stopped when I noticed it because I need to help a fellow author out) when Dio and Rex are entering the bunker and Rex is talking about how it would be a whole new ecosystem if the cave went down farther, his name isn’t capitalized in the sentence after that! Before posting chapters I recommend reading it before you publish it and carefully looking for errors. Anyways I hope you can help me in the future as I helped today! Keep writing you have an awesome talent.
wonderfull splendid artwork; go watch the anime and manga to get a deeper understanding after you watch the first season you wont be able to stop
The novel is extremely confusing the power system is not as clear as it seems on the surface there are also many inconsistencies The mc has multiple personalities and when the personality changes you dunno if it's the mc or some other character the thing that i don't like much is mc picking someone he considers the protagonist *yeah there are other children of destiny plot armour and insane talent* And now the mc is thinking about about going ans apologizing to him and offering him gifts also there was this random paragraph where a guy kills the mc which is super weird because from next chapter the story continue like nothing happened The Grammer is quite bad actually it's not that bad since i have read MTL novels sadly the author can't see from the eyes of the reader and expect us to know things he does about his story which makes it even harder to read i think the idea behind this novel is superb if only it was written by an experienced author even if the current author refine it *honestly i don't think it can be refined only rewritten * then it will be much better i am basing my review of off the 49 chapters i read
It was going good at beginning but later parts just makes you work your brain not to feel stupid lol. No fixed cultivation style; magic, qi, then science, underworld and even Norse mythology lol and it just keeps going.
Everything is amazing the background of characters the pacing isn't drawn too out but isn't super rushed although there are few times where words are repeated when they shouldn't (could be me being dumb sometimes) but overall highly recommend reading it
I didn't read yet,but just from the synopsis and the 'system' - 'fast cultivation' - 'Another World'.You got my full attention...Those damn 140 characters :s
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It's okay I guess, nothing too special another similar trope generic novel. After reading so many trash novels on this platform but this is okay actually better than most stuff that is flowing around this platform.