"What was the deal with bicorns?" Mandy asked.
"You… Sigh, okay, let's fight!" Without wasting any more words, Cyrus leapt towards her with great speed, although it was slower compared on this young lady in front of him it's still fast enough to startle the young lady in front of him.
While on the subject of trust, between her close aids, Emily trusted Lara more than her uncle Richard as her half sister truly cared for her safety.
There was a long pause amongst us as the information settled. We had never discussed it, but Alexis does graduate this year and would be leaving, the school and this town only being a step in her grand plan. With that also came a bunch of other uncertainties for us; would we be in the same dorm next year? Would we all be roommates again? Did we have a choice? Would get another roommate to replace Alexis? Did we all plan on staying at White Winter Prep?
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The story has been fairly interesting until I reach chapter 122. With all that magic in the world over hundreds of years and homophobia is still a thing, it's just disappointed. If you can't handle diversity then just don't bring it into the story. Possessing a positive and serious mind, I don't agree with how you portrait your "peculiar" characters. So my journey stops here. Thanks for the interesting chapters so far.
This goes hard, I mean really hard… I’m still in the beginning of the series. But the character really is unruly to the extreme. But in general. Writing are quite good and the story. Can be interesting.
I have a question if somone can answer it. is the mc a Pacifist as in dose he attack othere territorys/nobels/kingdoms and conquer them or he just develops his land and defend ?
Mediocre, a nice standard for 'average' to compare others with. It's nice that it's completed already and we don't have to wait week after week, but for the style it's in, there are lots of other novels on this site that does the job better (and lots that do it worse).The nice things about it are the occasional warm scenes and amusing characters. Although rare, the feeling of family and friends are well-appreciated. But the idiocy! The sheer, mind-blowing, soul-cringing idiocy! It's like almost all the characters in this story, even the supposedly 'intelligent' ones are competing for the Global Morons Championships! What kind of husband sits around crying about his mistakes while his wife is lying in front of him still alive but slowly dying? SAVE HER you absolute nincompoop! And all that standing around waiting for an enemy to strike first! Or worse, give them time to summon a total badass?! Or treating a death-zone as a tourism site and getting trapped!? Or worse, the gambling habits! It's like a guy, who, just after becoming a majority shareholder in a global corporation, went to a casino and bet his very life all night long! That dumb!On top of that, the whole mindset of 'might makes right' looks like a child's temper tantrum. So many times I hoped for intelligent responses and all we got was more and more reason for endless conflicts. That, and a lot of contradictions of behavior and supposed character. The westernized names, the hate for churches and all that portraying gods behaving as badly as petty spiteful children doesn't help either. What happened to the author? Got rejected by a churchy girl who wanted to save herself for marriage? Sure seems like it. The story might have done better to delve more into meaningful side-plots (like a certain sort-of-teacher involving gravity and her spunky son, or a certain sister of a city lord who could have been a love interest, or even that certain pair of lovers stuck in a really bad place for a crazy amount of time). But instead? We get more reasons for a fight scene (which while plentiful, are too focused on reasons for power than actual action. Dude. Rookie mistake. Too much telling, not enough showing.)In the end, this story feels immature, like the early works of a budding novelist. It's a good first effort, I guess? Like I said, a good standard 'average' to compare others with.
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