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This noval/books is the best I have ever read and the character development is just brilliant aswell as the world building! It has a perfect balance of power and weakness and when you read it, it feels as if your in the story. 5 out of 5 brilliant.
Among the new novels out there, this one really shines like a beacon. Although there are some amateurish writing here and there, the plot premise and overall storyline is great!My only complaint is that Earth doesn’t have interstellar travel even thousands of years in the future. For a sci-fi fan, it sure hurts…Still, a great novel with superb potential!
Wow! Compared to quite a number of books I've read, this one has an astonishing begining. The tension is thick, dark yet captivating. Good work author, thumbs up on the descriptions.Keep it up.
Okay here comes the great review of self proclaimed Master Blaster Plaster Trasher... Ugh... I guess I got a little self burn... Ahem Anyway here comes review after I read first five chapters.Pros Of Novel:1- The detailing of characters are great. Emma Fisher already became my Waifu and Alex and Ravi are best male characters. Lucy is still vaguely discribe but not every character can be discribed in just 5 chaps.2- The plot is intriguing. All these things like it's futurestic yet there ain't much need to describe atmosphere is what makes reading iy convenient.3- Till now, none of the chapter is anything boring. They piqued interest and were able to maintain that.(No even I can do that... I can't do anything though)Now onto the Cons:Well there ain't much maybe cuz it's beginning or maybe it's just that good but here are some suggestions.... Try to maintain world building. The surrounding the crowd and even tiny things like rooms and halls. Even though it looks like there ain't any need to do that now and story is interesting. If you suddenly started world building all at once, it will become hard as well as boring. So If yoh start doing it now irrespective of whether it's needed or not with interesting stories still there, I think it would help you in long run.So Finally My 5 Start review cuz there ain't any flaws for now at leat.
Personally, I love this book. it's a masterpiece although I've seen the idea in some other books it's still amazing reading it. Please don't stop updating, Mage, or I'll...- *cough*Back to the topic, don't stop writing! ?
It is a good novel to read and has some flaws but the author is obviously trying his best, so we all must try our best to help him succeed. if you are looking for a novel to read this is it don't disregard it as the potential is infinite.
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The story line is great and worth reading, the concept is new so hope story will skyrocket. Magic has always been my keen interest so, best of luck author
Is this a lin Fan novels ?????????????????Will change or delte the review as needed so :D??????????????????
AuTHoR..update faster..first chp is dope..already hate the princess..bash her and kill her....anyway it cool..keep MC OP.but unilike other stories,,make him hide and use it secretly...like a hiding dragon? like he appears to be a cripple but has a secret identity as an OP MF??keep MC OP...add some romance and fluff...just build it...dont make MC a perverted idiot or make his lovers shallow...if harem keep it small
Grammar needs to be improved, otherwise it's a decent novel with an actual low key main character.there have been low key mcs before but the moment someone does'nt give them "face" it's over with being low key. i hope this character stays low key even when he gets stronger.writing quality: bad grammar but it is not unreadable.2.5 stars would mean average so I'll give you 2 starsstability of updates: no clue only 3 chapters are out. I'll give you half stars so 3.other things can't be judged with 3 chapters released.Character design: I'll give you 3 stars, until now the characters are pretty generic and except for the mc no other characters were properly introduced, but as i said i'm eager to see a low key mc.