this book is in violation of amazon kindle copyright.this book is in violation of amazon kindle copyright.this book is in violation of amazon kindle copyright.
The premise of the story is somewhat decent, but the actual execution is terrible and makes no sense (There will be spoilers below from the first 20-25 trial read chapters).The people in this world are absurdly stupid. For example, at some point (~chapter 20) the MC goes to a fish racing competition where people gamble. He meets the director of the opposing hospital across the road from his at that competition. He doesn't recognize the director of the "massive 10-story, famous" hospital across the road which happens to be his "sworn enemy," but that director immediately recognizes the MC, the owner of some small dinky 2-story hospital which barely gets any customers. Go figure.And it doesn't even end there. The MC's cat touches a fish, and the referee of the contest comes over and says that the MC needs to buy it. He initially seems normal, but after getting a phone call, he says that the MC needs to buy the fish for 300k (yes that is a ridiculous price, everyone else around and even the MC realize that it is unusually high). The referee even says that he isn't allowed to leave and must buy the fish since his cat touching it counts as the cat selecting it. The MC, being the absolute braindead pushover he is, decides to buy the fish. He doesn't at all find it suspicious, even though he knows that "every pet hospital other than his own (which all also happen to be "unethical" is out for his blood for some reason. He isn't secretly biding his time to get revenge or scam the guy who tried to scam him or anything, he just buys it with no plans or anything. It is then revealed that the head of the opposing hospital bribed the referee to make the MC pay a ridiculous amount for the fish (Wow, Shocker).Some more dumb brainless face-slapping chapters later, the MC wins after his fish turns into a true dragon. The director guy then decides to try and scare off the MC from claiming his prize money with some thug, and when that fails he follows the MC around for a bit to try and kill the MC. And his reasoning for killing the MC is the 8 million yuan that the MC won in the race for getting first. (For reference, 8 million yuan is chump change to people with positions in that world). Not because he has a way to communicate with the one and only True Dragon in that entire city, which is literally a priceless pet. For 8 million yuan. Like if you are gonna have cardboard brainless copy-paste villains, at least try and make the blind greed somewhat reasonable author.There are a ton of similar events/logic to this but I am way too lazy to describe them all.
Title: 修仙从沙漠开始Author：中天紫薇大帝Status: completed (838 chapters +7 extras).....................................................................
real great book Ilove the character design, the plot and the world background
I have read this more than once and I really like it so fare ?. I would love for more chapters and I have also voted for more please relece more ❤
Read 100+ then i Couldnt take it anymoreThe first few chapter where he Steals The car was slightly interesting, afterwards it goes downhill real fast-every girl intro is followed up how many times MC got into bed with her, and saves them their current XYZ problem says “i dont need Payment because i beded you before”- the girls Keep their normal lives which leads to “incidents”
Good story to read. I red all available chapters on one sitting. There are some spelling and grammar error at first but at later chapters it became almost nonexistent. Keep up the good work. Hope you write more chapters. :)
So starting off, this is an amazing novel, one of the best I have read on here. The plot is great, I like the direction it is going and it has alot of potential and room for growth. The author listens to his readers but doesn't just accept everything we tell him to do or change, he first weights the pros & cons it will have on the story and then sees if it fesible to add in his story(also puts his own spin on the idea to make it unique). He is also growing(tremendously) as a new author and has made less and less grammar mistakes since he started writing. The MC is very likeable and has very deep character development (he's dumb at times, but he is still a kid). The background and setting of the story is very nice and in my opinion is a unique spin on novels with similar fantasy setting. If you like novels with: Weak to strong MC, Beast taming, System(Game elements), And Magic, this is the novel for you. Should be Top 10 in original works in my opinion, at least Top 20 just needs more chapters
Read one your own risk.The story just get more and more trash in translation and plot same for the Mcs personality that did go from analysing his surroundings better then after he became a superhuman
Honestly not that bad but the wordpadding bothers me alot. It makes 3 paragraphs with each saying the exact same thing just in different format and the over repetitive use of the "did you know" for example: the use of 'date trees' and how it is considered the desert people's "bread" is wordpadded into a long paragraph that keeps appearing chapter after chapter to the point where you feel like its being shoved down your throat. If you dont mind the over use of wordpadding then you might enjoy this but its a pass for me.
"The Netherworld King's long grey hair fluttered despite the lack of wind"I really don't understand why the author must write this line in prologue chapter. from my understanding, this netherworld king is a skeleton figure. so, where are those hairs attached in his head? did they grow in the bone skull? Did hair suppose to grow and attached in the scalp?
I’m gonna do this without spoilers so sorry if I don’t put in enough detail. Honestly I love this novel so much. I like the mc and in my opinion the female main character is done very well and I actually like her. Plus she’s also useful unlike some other female characters... *cough* *cough* *Sakura* anyways if I had to gripe about one thing it would be the update pace but honestly even then I’ve seen much worse. We get a chapter once every 2 or 3 days which isn’t bad. Overall you should give this novel a chance as overall I think it’s a good read.