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This story is like Womanizing Mage or A Step Into The Past. So you have an idea of what to expect. MC will definitely be scum but funny at least. I’m sure no one was expecting a ecchi comedy like this. I guess the female audience would probably drop it. This novel is not for everyone but I can see this type of Genre get mindlessly popular. Personally, as much as I love shameless MCs, I’m not into this one.The politics are so bad I can't help but facepalm.1. His disguise keeps being figured out.-Fortune Teller - nope-Divine Doctor - nope-Psychic- nope -Even his real identity - nope turns out to be something else.Many good ideas being implemented but keep changing!!
A good Story . . . .
Hmm, I read the raws, the story is so good at the beginning, but as the story progress through about 100+ chaps, I feel like the story and the focus of the novel swayed a bit or so...... Also it looks like the MC become a little or quite weak compared to the strenght he shows in the starter parts of the story. But overall, I dropped it midway, but hey the start is quite good, unfortunately it seems it is losing its potential bit by bit.
Hello!This is the author with another shameless 5 star review!Please give my book a read! Comments, reviews, and potential plot ideas are welcome!Thank you for taking the time to support my book!-Sleepy Slime
I'm following up and from what I've seen so far, it's a very generic theme with the same things that every cliche novel has ... When we say cliché it's not in the bad sense, it's simply that something new is missing, something that sets a novel apart from other. I think I've had enough of all these novels to tell the truth.Sigh...
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If you like the reincarnation genre with a lot of fighting and game elements this is your novel.Main character is a little cliche with things like betrayed and seeking revenge.But otherwise this is a good novel.
1. Its a realy nice read. Nice Pace, and good ideas. but later in Novel the author thought, urgs hero has updated fast till now i will not let him update fast again because i am god or so... It´s totally moronic how Hero with system get blocked to lvl up without reason..2. Warning my Personal thinking on this Story. The free updates stopped 7 days ago at chapter 267 so for 7 days they only updated chapter for money no FREE chapters. For a Story without deep background or in the top 3 or top 5 or even top 10 this is in my eyes totaly moneygrubbing..
Really great?? Keep up the good work author San ? ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Great story need more mass release to get in the spirit of reading filler for the 140 character so what's your plan for today and faster pace