I love the novel so far and I might have some ideas for a new novel and I do appreciate you and all the writers for making novel because I can tell how hard getting some ideas for novel and also for the suggestions there are 20 suggestions split into parts and also I’m just helping you don’t need to be pressured by me or by anyone else and you can just use some of these tags as reference and I will read your novel’s no matter what other people think or say about the novel
I’m just going to say that this story doesn’t just throw the Mc into the world and expect him to already be a king of everyone. He is slowly learning his way and even didn’t awaken a got tier skill. And his relationships with the goblinas are amazing as you can feel the tension the love the goblinas have for him and how he is falling for them even harder. Also it’s not unrealistic about him having the whole tribe to himself he is having the main girls and allowing his tribe to grow with other tribes slowly growing. The one and only thing I would ask is if there could be a training arc cause right now the tribe is a bit too weak cause it is in its baby steps but I have a feeling the author is about to solve that funnily enough
You'll fall in love with the characters.
I'd like to know more about the characters. I see potential in this novel
Espero la segunda parte este libro me esta gustando quiero ver como Ariel sufre?☠️?Saludos para autora ? ??????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???????
Tis was good... if only Author/MC wasn't much of a cuck, imagine needing an answer as to why he out it up and him replying that it was only a little bit. NTR is NTR. End of discussion. Such a shame
I really liked this book from the first chapter and I hope the writing quality would continue to be consistent as the novel continues.Its pretty great from the get go and I have a feeling I won't be disappointed.Thank you to the author for writing this gem sincerely.
truly one of the stories of all time. iIliked the part when hikaru came to fight morbius skibidi toilet and said, "Hikari dikari dock the mouse went up the clock!"
u can improve ur story telling it kinda mid I mean the way like no commas, full stop and some spelling mistakes
Maybe too early to leave this review but I absolutely love the story just from the start, please write more stories like this I will definitely read!
Wow. Another book of Author Mary. So, excited to read it. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot