Indiana Jones and the Secret of the Huck
Why is the plot is so slow?
I understand that, I read one book that was a true 5/5 and now I haven't been able to pick up a new book in like 2 months. Everything else just kinda sucks.
Hope u guys read this, cause this sht is amazingly good and worth your time !
I remember reading this bit dropping Halfway
when more ?
I'm swear melting from the inside out. All the grandpas are so sweet im crying
I'm a fan of this novel already! The reason why I wrote a review is because I want to support the writer. His work is really great, it's been a while since I found a great novel like this. In the story, the male lead is a nice guy as well as their parents. It's a shame that their life is so tough, hope they'll get a better life.
the most obvious flaw i can see are the way author word things. It's like reading mtl while you're out of it from what i can tell, just without the inconsistency of names, titles and etc. The second thing i'll say is that my suspense of disbelief immediately collapsed because of the implications from a couple sentences that relates to the science and logic of your world (the best wording i can do currently to get across my meaning). And yes while this is a xianxia novel and you shouldn't judge it based on real world physics but this novel also started on earth and should at least make some effort at being grounded in physics (even if it's the physics of sci fi media)Tldr: Wording definitely needs a lot of work and make some basic research on science because it reads like the science comprehension of a conspiracy theorist or someone who has enough knowledge of the existence of those words but only a halfway there to basic comprehension of them and how they relate.
OMG! Seeing that vote and comments section at the end of each chapters only serves to propel me to the next one! Can't stop reading this masterpiece
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i like the suspense and the team dynamic, a very good novel