nice story development but cliche trope i must say
Your works are amazing , read from beginning to finish and I loved it
despite the mc's bad character at the beginning of the story, the characters are very well developed and the quality of writing is good. I hope the author continues to release more chapters.
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A slow burn type of novel where our hero unwittingly alters the balance between the parties. A self discovery journey where the clueless young man will use his book knowledge as a foundation to become better. So many paths, which are detours and which will lead to destiny? Who knows? Take a walk, enjoy the scenery, have some melon seeds as you watch the mayhem
Early review I am on chapter 85.
The story is written decently when it comes to grammar, sentence structure, etc.
World background is pretty interesting everyone having the chance to unlock a system and the systems interconnect in some scenarios.
MC system is op but so far mc has not really taken advantage of it. Honestly mc doesn’t make many logical choices after he unlocks the system and jumps straight into adventuring.
My main gripe about the story is the author doesn’t know how to portray different age levels for different characters. Everyone in this story reacts, talks, and behaves like a 10 year old. People yelling out of surprise or having an o face when they are adults living in a world that has many people fighting monsters.
Overall I like the premise of the story and really hope the maturity of the characters goes up as it progresses.
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Nice work, i must say. can't wait to see how the relationship between Selena and Damien turns out in the future
Can you guys write reviews, I understand my novel is still in the early stages, but I really need to know if I should continue with it, so the more the reviews the better. Thank you
Author Mary! it's me, from Wattpad. I'm one of your first readers. I want you to know that while it hurts that you deleted your book on Wattpad, I will always be supportive of your works. thank you for letting me know that you renamed the book and placed it here, and thank you for writing a Book 2!
I skipped the tags, and just went straight to reading. Found NTR later and coughed out blood. Sorry author but I'm not into NTR so yeah I dropped it.
The first twenty chapters were rough and hard to follow. There are a lot of terms and concepts that are a bit different from other cultivation novels and the whole 'editing skills parts' are jarring. The story picks up a lot as it goes on and now by chapter 40 I'm completely hooked. All the earlier issues are gone and the author/translator seemed to really find their 'voice'. If you like slice of life, weak to strong, slower growth, secret identities, etc... Then this novel is right up your alley.
Hey guys, author here. This is the first proper novel I have ever written. It basically contains all the moments that I would like to have in my ideal romance novel, done to the best of my literary abilities. Hope you enjoy it. Feel free to comment your thoughts.